Tutorial crits please???

[MVP]

I respect that a)you are not English and that b)you speak English a million times better than I speak dutch, but ,I think the first thing you need to do if you are writing a tutorial in English is to go into Word and spellcheck your document and also take out any swear words (even if they are ****'s!!). I, like many people, love a professionally done tutorial and there are so many of them out there that if you come across one that looks basic, swears and has lots of spelling mistakes in it, I just ignore it. So, get rid of the swearing, spell check the document and make the layout abit more pleaseing to the eye. Nice one.

[mmwizard]

Well, thanks a lot.
I've improved the tutorial using you're advice...

For now thats done for a while. About the layout i'm not much a HTML wizard.
What do you think about the content???

grtz,

MMwizard

http://www.fictief.com/tuts/Meshmodeling.htm

[MVP]

100% better!
You don't need me to tell you that it is looking very good now.
I don't think you need to add more to the layout or it will get complicated. It is good for a first tutorial, nice and simple, but I think you could build on it from here.
On a personal note, I can help you with your grammar if you like?

[mmwizard]

Oh that would be perfect.

Maybe I can learn some from it too...
I'm planning some other tutorials in the future so maybe you can look at it for once and awhile???

:thumbsup:

[MVP]

No problem mate.

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