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AnimAmaker
09-01-2006, 12:00 PM
Blue character as karlson (finished), grey as kid (in progress)
ftp://80.240.211.2/New_5.avi
p/s this ftp is unstable

thedigitalmonkey
09-02-2006, 03:30 AM
it's a good start, but almost the whole thing is too "mushy." You need to vary your timing, add some holds, and show some snap- intertwine fast motions with all the slow, smooshy ones. May also benefit from better arcs when he turns his body, and have him start with the torso and turn the upper parts after (more breakdowns.)

The best part is at teh very end when he puts his finger up in the air to make a gesture- it's the only snappy motion in there, has good follow through, try to add more variation and work from there.

Hope that helps! Keep it up

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