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MatthiasKoenig
08-31-2006, 02:40 PM
Hello!,


i try to made a concept as an 3d artist , it is funny but... in my case it isnt so successful

please give me a lot of tipps and critics !, may this helps me for my next picture !

thanks a lot !

LINK : http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/242273/242273_1157034077_large.jpg

Matthias.
iLegacy
08-31-2006, 03:07 PM
Hey MK! :lightbulb

Nice picture!
I think you have to paint more highlights to the right border of the boat where the sun is hitting it. And i would repaint the sky with a photo as template.

cu Simon
klingspor
08-31-2006, 06:00 PM
Good job, I like your choice of color and the painterly style works very well!

A little critique: Is your submarine's lower part in the water and the upper above it? I'm not sure what I'm seeing... if it is only half in the water, try making the water surface more pronounced. Right now, it's kind of hard to tell just what's going on.

Oh, and happy birthday!
MatthiasKoenig
08-31-2006, 06:54 PM
thanks for posting ,

the submarine in a dry dock , so .. there is no water in my scene .. arr i really have to learn how to draw digital !..

please go on with your critics!

thank you !
iLegacy
08-31-2006, 07:28 PM
Hm there is a hole in the front of the submarine with blue flames or lights i think. I can't define
what it is - maybe you should add more information to make it clear.

cu Simon
Steen
08-31-2006, 08:06 PM
I really like the perspective. That and your angle make it look huge. I can see your 3d brain working.
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