View Full Version : woman portrait, Young Xiao Qi (3D)
FIREDD 08-30-2006, 03:11 AM http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/1287/1287_1156907501_medium.jpg (http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/1287/1287_1156907501_large.jpg)
Title: woman portrait
Name: Young Xiao Qi
Country: China
Software: 3ds max, mental ray, Photoshop
hi all !
this is my new work,
i use 3ds max 8 for the whole model,
and i use "3dsmax hair" creating the woman's hair and fur.
i use "sss fast skin "Material for the skin.
and render with mentalray.
i 'm really not good at english,i hope you can like it !
please give me some comments and critiques .
thanks all ! :>
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wow. skin is awesome! The metal on her jewelry looks great as well! 4 stars. Nice work, especially for all 3DS Max. Great job way to rock!
i like the skin and the lips !! :) but not the hair do.. if she had a long hair i think would look more attractive :thumbsup:
xolvierx
08-30-2006, 06:53 AM
really nice skin textures. the anatomy looks good but im not a specialist in character tought. The things i dont like is the shadows the hair creates on the forehead, it looks like the hair is not real. The ear geometry looks to perfect i thing, it would be nice to add a bit of variation on the ears curve.
general its really nice, 4 stars
Silverwing
08-30-2006, 07:31 AM
She looks phantastic!
Absolutely great skinshader
and great Lighting.
Almost real...
Absolutely briliant...
5 stars!
Menesis
08-30-2006, 08:36 AM
Although I think the anatomy isn't totally correct (there's something about the eyes), the picture is truly amazing because of that skin! So real! :thumbsup:
ChojinDSL
08-30-2006, 08:45 AM
Wow, amazing work.
There's only two, maybe three things that reveal that its not a photograph.
1. The hair strands seem a bit too smooth. e.g. The highlights on the hair to be specific.
2. The eyes. I cant quite pinpoint it, but there's something wrong about them. If she wore sunglasses I probably would have thought it was a photo. The thing about photorealism is, if something is slightly off, you notice it immediately, especially with things you are used to seeing every day.
3. The skin shading around the chest area seems a bit too rubbery/wax-like.
The shading of the face is pretty much perfect.
Still, its an amazin image.
ipdesigner
08-30-2006, 08:56 AM
*she is alive!! its almost real...let her smile for me:scream::bounce:
JO-animator
08-30-2006, 09:51 AM
Great work. very nice face.:thumbsup:
Great work :thumbsup: 4*
I love skin shader, would you be so kind and share your sss fast skin settings with us? :)
tbb519519
08-30-2006, 11:06 AM
great work~
the skin looks very goooood
like it very much:thumbsup:
only one comment is the hair looks not very nature
Limponi
08-30-2006, 11:14 AM
wow......so real
5 stars
good work, I like it.. The skin is top
I think the hair can be improve..
but it is great!
Nehak
08-30-2006, 11:33 AM
Very very beautiful work. I'm no specialist in character modeling...but just want to say some things from general observation, if you make a hair style which is more real/something that you see around you; and do the eye makeup and eyelashes more natural, she will look absolutely real.
Love the skin and lips, very real! 5* from me :thumbsup:
this skin looks too real! wonderful work!
congratulations
alexfalchi
08-30-2006, 02:37 PM
wow, impressive.
geoffsmiths
08-30-2006, 02:50 PM
Hi there,
the skin's looking great! The whole picture looks great!
Where can I get a free and good tutorial to add a realistic skin texture? And where can I get realistic skin textures?
Thanks!
Geoff
Jadetiger
08-30-2006, 03:09 PM
Wow that skin looks awesome. Great job!
dickma
08-30-2006, 05:21 PM
I don't know why this work is hyped by someone that is worth 4 or 5 stars.
Somebody mentioned it correctly, there is a problem in anatomy.
1. Neck is too narrow when compared to the head size.
2. Eye sockets isn't deep enough so it looks too awkward. (the eyeslashes looks like insect legs), wrong eyebrow position that doesn't match the forehead and bad makeup.
3. Ears are too big and long, it should have the same height as the nose.
4. Hair, just not enough natural and wig like.
Anthonie
08-30-2006, 07:45 PM
somewhat what dickma said.
It looks cool but indeed some anatomy problems.
still though I give 4 stars
CGadrian
08-30-2006, 07:59 PM
wow !
the lips ....perfect ! yummmmy !:)
good work, man !!!
bravo !
ts-falcon
08-30-2006, 08:23 PM
nice work! the skin on the lower face is amazing, same for the lips. any chances for a tut on your skin shader setup :P?
Rollo3D
08-30-2006, 10:06 PM
Beautifull Work!:thumbsup:
coochaki
08-30-2006, 10:50 PM
very cool!
very nice skin shader!:thumbsup:
wow man great job - I like the feel of the image ...kinda looks a bit french - very nice
Intonater
08-31-2006, 12:54 AM
Wow~ It is really a nice work! good job~
if the hair is more natural that will be good
Good job,very nice,i like :bounce:
FIREDD
08-31-2006, 02:30 AM
thanks all !
thank you for your comments and critiques .
i will improve on my next work!
thank you !
Wow, wonderful render! Very nice colours and lighting and the model looks great. The only two things to crit from me are the pose and the eyes; So many character renders seem to be content with just using the default pose and only move the eyes a bit. Why not offset the upper body a little and give the character more life?
The eyes are probably the weakest part of the image as they look far too dull. It looks more like an eye texture mapped onto a sphere than actual reflecting and reflecting geometry. It would work much better if the eyes were more reflective and had much sharper highlights.
Wiro
Per-Anders
08-31-2006, 03:43 AM
Hi, could we see a mesh please for this?
Currently my main problem with this image is the dramatic difference in quality between the facial skin texture and almost the whole rest of the image/model (and the matting fringing going on around the hair area where it comes into the face and the neck).
However, ignoring this, for the moment the hair needs to be worked up, currently it's very flat and lacks depth in it's specular, add multiple speculars and allow a little bit of flyaway hair to break it up, it has the straw look going on rather than hairs real look of fine fibres. The texture on the ear looks almost completely out of place, very low resolution, almost like there's some skin damage there, that needs working up to teh same level as elsewhere, alternatively consider using some DOF to defocus that part if you dont' intend to improve it further. The eyes look airbrushed/painted and 2d especially the highlights, (which is why they look very odd here) work on a better texture for them that actually simulates a real eye, you will get a better effect that way.
Wow... nice job. Congrats.
rawwad
09-01-2006, 03:42 PM
Excelent job! She looks great! 5stars
Jaehan
09-02-2006, 04:23 PM
Man..Looks cool. She has a character.
To me, her lips' bump is little too strong and her helix looks flat on the front view.
Five stars from me. :)
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