A newbie & his first face

[unknowngod430]

umm i don't see anything?

make sure you posted up a picture or somehing so we have someting to crit

[relledom]

hi unknowngod430,
i m new here as i said above and i have probs to post things -.- don t ask me why ?
well here are two links for the pics :http://s1.simpleupload.de/f0b807035/view BLL5.jpg.html

and : http://s1.simpleupload.de/f4992ae03/view BLL4.jpg.html

i ll try to find out what i did wrong :banghead: cause when i pushed the 'insert image' button and chose an URL it did not apear in the actual post :(

[relledom]

I m terribly sorry for not posting for such a long time but here is finally the pic of the head :))
please tell me what you would change and whether you d like to have more detailed views. thx ^^

[Sister Ky]

Looking fine so far.
Only three little things:
Nostrils are toooo wide! Blowing her nose like a camel! O.o
The region of the scull where the brain is located, the back of the head (what's the english word? :-/ ) ... it's not wide enough (along the x-axis).
The back of the neck is too bent and resulting from that the neck's too thin...

Greetz, Ky.

[relledom]

thank you very much ^^
as i see you have some expirience with blender...have you got an idea how to make the hair (particles) look nice ? i haven't posted them now , cause they look so terrible :D thanks a lot ^^ (btw , wo zum kuckuk ist erlenbach ? )
cya S.

[Sister Ky]

Sorry, I'm giving a somewhat a wrong expression with that sig... not much of experience with blender, just starting to learn myself -.-;;
Wanted to put it in double-brakets, but those 150 signs for the sig are just SO *not* enough XD

Hehe, ich könnte ja jetzt fies sein und sagen "irgendwo" :rolleyes: :p :D aber sein wir mal nicht so: "irgendwo in Unterfranken, auf halben Weg zwischen Frankfurt und Würzburg" :)
Und, wo liegt dein "irgendwo"?

Greetz, Ky.

[relledom]

oh what a pity :cry: and i already have hoped that you could help me -.- well sh** happens ^^

aha, mein "irgenwo" liegt in "meenz, wie es singt un' lacht "

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