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jamesjonesjr
08-25-2006, 08:10 AM
I just graduated from Full Sail and I just would like some feedback on my demo reel and critiques are welcome... be brutal... thats the only way I'll get better... Everything including rendering was done within two months.
compressions not that good yet so please bear with.

320Demo 4.74MB (http://www.jamesjonesjr.com/Video_Content/JJones_Demo_Reel_07_06_320.mov)

http://www.jamesjonesjr.com/
AikoWorld
08-25-2006, 02:43 PM
+ Great antispation
+ Good Sillouettes
- The big guys mouth reaction is not good, it those not give the fealing he is or shocked to see what he is looking, or that he is happy and wants to mimic the move.
Maybe make close his mouth more and uppen his eyebrow
Maybe make him say Oeee like a little boy getting a lollypop

For the rest great work man, i enjoyed watching this...

3*
jamesjonesjr
08-25-2006, 10:32 PM
thanks akio for the comment...
ClayMathews
08-25-2006, 11:02 PM
I love the opening......but I think I'm a bit biased. It's good stuff man. A few small timing issues and maybe some changes in acting choices, but overall pretty good. I could go on but I've already given you my opinion on it. Start posting some WIP models or animations. I want to see what you are currently working on.
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