Character animation reel - 30s / 3Mb / QT

[Harregarre]

Pretty good.
For the crits: I'm just a beginner but maybe this helps:

The Neil Armstrong clip has quite some flaws. The lipsync lacks definition just look at the moment where he says 'but'. It just goes from half open to open. I don't really get why he moves his eyes like that when he doesn't say anything, it doesn't really fit the thing he's saying. The eye-movement is pretty choppy and doesn't move in arcs.

Other than that it looks pretty nice, maybe someone else can help you with some crits.

[michelmorel]

Thanks, Harregarre. Some of my firends told me why I was doing big eye darts and I said that I imagined Neil Armstrong recitating his prepared speech on the moon. I felt that it was hilarious but I guess I will change the eye darts because it's bugging everybody. I'll check the lip sync again, thanks for the feedback, well spoted!

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