HARDCORE MODELING!: 30Days_30Models: Silver

[vince22]

2nd model screwdriver 2 hours

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/284/screwdrivebeautyam1.jpg

beauty

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/2200/screwdriversidefrontdy7.jpg

side/front

http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/7606/screwdrivertopbg0.jpg

top

thnx for looking

[vince22]

hippo Model #3

time: 4 hours

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/7067/hippobeautyzg1.jpg
beauty

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/556/hippofronttd9.jpg
front

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/6551/hipposideng5.jpg
side

http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/9136/hippotoptx8.jpg
top

thnx for looking, c&c most appreciated

[mike0006]

There's something very off about the proportions on the hippo. To me, it looks more like a pig than a hippo.

Try grabbing some more reference photos. Just from memory, I would think that the legs need to be more defined because hippos are very heavy and their legs need to support that weight. Also the belly is very... je ne sais quoi. I'd say that it needs to bulge more to make the hippo look heavier. But, since I haven't researched reference images, I could be way off.

Also, I think the metal shader on the screwdriver is way too bright for environment. The model is sooo good by itself. I think the shader is really distracting from the model.

Still, this is some nice modeling. Keep it up.

[Noggy]

The screwdriver is very nicely done. I applaud you for trying something organic.:applause: The porportions are alittle off but you are the first I've seen try a hippo.

Its definetly a lot harder than something mechanical. Good job so far.

[vince22]

thnx guys for the comments very helpful, gonna go rework the hippo with your critques before I move on to any other models.

[vince22]

hi guys, I'm back with the changes you suggested,

hippo

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/6087/hippobeautyom0.jpg

beauty

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/2974/hippofrontqh6.jpg

front

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/2176/hipposidejx4.jpg

side

http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/8164/hippotopwg5.jpg

top


http://img222.imageshack.us/img222/3654/screwdriverfixsp2.jpg

appreciate some more c&c, thnx in advance

[vince22]

model 4- gameboy

http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/2458/gbbeautymh5.jpg


http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/7551/gbaorthofp2.jpg

c&c most appreciated, thnx for looking

[robo3687]

nice work on the gameboy.....makes me think i should go back and model the battery bit as well....i have the section all there for it...just couldn't be bothered doing it...lol

[vince22]

robo3687- thnx robo, I'd definietly like to see you tackle the battery compartment man. Your gameboy is definetly the best cg gameboy I've ever seen.

model 5- Model T

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/9499/modeltbeautyau0.jpg
beauty

http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/8696/modeltorthowu0.jpg
ortho

[anishmations]

good work dude. the model T is very nice!

[vince22]

model 6 - video camera

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/769/camcorderbeautybo1.jpg

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/9813/camcorderorthoiv9.jpg

model 7 - tugboat

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/7157/tugbeautyfronthx9.jpg

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/9628/tugboatbeautyrearhl6.jpg

http://img85.imageshack.us/img85/8895/tugboatortholt9.jpg

thnx for looking, c&c most appreciated

[gaiXyn]

I'm digging your tugboat....very good!

[icedeyes]

I love all your models except that of the hippo... still too blocky for an organic model... other than that great details man..

[vince22]

Binder -thnx

icedeyes- thnx, I agree with the hippo being too blocky for an organic model, thats something I'll keep in mind when reworking the hippo

model 8: uzi

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/7717/uzibeautyck8.jpg

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/7063/uziorthocm3.jpg

model 9: desert eagle

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/1280/deserteaglebeautyaf4.jpg

http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/1959/deserteagleorthorp0.jpg

[vince22]

model 10: horse


http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/2650/horsebeautyoa5.jpg

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/3577/horseorthoyr6.jpg

thnx for looking c&c most appreciated.

[RobertoOrtiz]

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