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XINTSUAI
08-21-2006, 07:01 PM
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Title: didactic illustration.
Name: Thiago Brayner
Country: Brazil
Software: Photoshop

My english isn't very good.. so, I will speak the minimum
possible.
I make this drawing to illustrate a didactic book from here
(Brazil). This illustration has A3 size. The illustration talk about
the childrens and your personalites.. each one is absolutely
singular, impar, unique. But, at same time... all are equal in your
rights.. etc, etc, etc ...
Samuraikuroi
08-21-2006, 10:02 PM
Hola Thiago, Muito agradável....Cor, Estilo!
XINTSUAI
08-21-2006, 10:31 PM
Hola Thiago, Muito agradável....Cor, Estilo!

Muito obrigado (thank you)..
minminxu
08-22-2006, 06:36 AM
It's a lovely picture!~~~~~~I like it~~~~~I like the scene~~~~and I like the painting of sky!~~~~~~nice wooooork!~~~~~~~keep it up~~~~~~~:bounce: :bounce:
mv
08-22-2006, 10:01 AM
Cool drawing, it does its job quite nicely (displaying different personalities).

Is the sky supposed to be covered by text? if not, all the sky area seems to be empty and makes the composition very awkward with everything stuck on the bottom and right.

I don't like the colors. There are colors all over the place that don't complement themselves, clash and don't drive the eye. The shading style is also very hybrid, it's neither flat shaded nor 3d dimensional. I think you should try to go with simpler color schemes and use very saturated colors only to focus on some parts and drive the eye in your composition.
XINTSUAI
08-22-2006, 01:18 PM
Cool drawing, it does its job quite nicely (displaying different personalities).

Is the sky supposed to be covered by text? if not, all the sky area seems to be empty and makes the composition very awkward with everything stuck on the bottom and right.

I don't like the colors. There are colors all over the place that don't complement themselves, clash and don't drive the eye. The shading style is also very hybrid, it's neither flat shaded nor 3d dimensional. I think you should try to go with simpler color schemes and use very saturated colors only to focus on some parts and drive the eye in your composition.

Thank you for the help.. I will look for this details...

To the others that post here, thank you.

The empty area on the sky is yes for text....
GOTgraphic
08-23-2006, 04:37 AM
Excellent work! Good character designs, I like them.
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