Hoiree, Thief Paladin, Jerome Moo Wen Han (2D)

[Nuages]

Well done! Great atmosphere, nice colors! I like that painting-style!

[SeifoSid]

lot of depth, nice looking bike, the color scheme is a bit limited but works well, nice work.

[notpill]

Cool Jerome, I like it! its ...fast!!
The lights on vehicles are impressively rendered.
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[mv]

Nice pic, dynamic! I like that character, though I don't really see if it's a guy or a girl.

Also, I think the composition is a bit flawed, as his glance drives opur eye out of the picture. Would suit better a landscape format with the police car on the right side.

Also, it feels like the lighting on the hero's vehicle doesn't fit the overall mood of the piece (too grey / blue compared to the reddish ambient).

[jeromoo]

Nuages: Thank you

SeifoSid: Thank you. I was trying to go for a lower saturated mood with limited palette. Not sure if I am entirely successful.

notpill: Hi there, thanks for liking the lights. They are fun to produce!

mv: Thanks for your valuable crits. I have to admit that my composition is indeed flawed! I didn't plan anything properly in the painting. Everything is done freehand, with all the designs and ideas made on the go, and many changes made along the way, which isn't a smart thing to do at all! I tried to make the bike and the boy (yeah, Hoiree is a boy :) ) pop out from the background. The bluish colour come from the the lights on the unseen dashboard and the sky overheard somewhere behind the viewer. And yeah, it could also have looked nicer in landscape mode.

Cheers!

[MichaelZHsee]

lovely piece jerome~i do agreed what mv mentioned bout the composition,but the overall turns out good though.i like especially the salmon pinkish pallete and the mood in the scene.:thumbsup: keep it coming my friend,looking forward to ur graphic novel

[wildcory1]

I love this. The colors the contrast, the movement. THis painting has a lot going on. Keep up the good work. 4star

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