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Squibbit
08-18-2006, 11:50 PM
she sells flowers


http://www.saunalahti.fi/panuom/FLorist_1.jpg

eishiya
08-19-2006, 12:01 AM
Oh YES, this is awesome. For now, my only crit is that her torso is waaay too long. Shortening it will be difficult because you'll have to reposition her arms (or just one arm, if you raise her legs and butt instead of lowering her upper body), but it's a pretty critical flaw, so it'll be worth the trouble to fix it now.

notpill
08-19-2006, 12:24 AM
Cool!, i'll buy flower from her, a lot of flower!
Very good texuring on the dress and soo much sexy pose:scream:.

Agreed about the loong torso and also the breast it's a little 'down'. All the figure seems stretched.
i tried to cut away a portion of the image and it works!
Look here (http://www.giulianobrocani.com/PVT/FLorist_2.jpg)

RalphDamiani
08-19-2006, 03:07 AM
Hah! Very nice! I like the background too. =)

Other than the torso I'd tone down just a bit the highlights of her thigh, it looks somewhat like plastic, compared to the shading of the face and wrists. =)

Squibbit
08-20-2006, 09:29 PM
alright, how's this?

! - - - much thanks for all the critics, peoples - - - !

(viewed the pic, notpill, but i think she was a bit too short again in that one :) )

http://www.saunalahti.fi/panuom/Florist_2a.jpg

Shadowbrooke
08-21-2006, 03:00 AM
She looks sexy. I like the flowers next to her too. She reminds me of Poison Ivy, except she dressed up like a nun ?!?! Hm...Overall I like the composition and her pose. Nice start!

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