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fightingthumb
08-18-2006, 04:21 PM
Hey yall. I have been working on this for a day or two, and I dont know how I feel about it. I think some of the motion is ok, but the over all piece fells kinda of blah. Id appreciate a critique. thanks! Its DivX compressed, so sorry if that doesnt work for some people...

scrooged (http://www.thecarriedawayfilm.com/movies/blast16.avi)
diegosocart12
08-18-2006, 05:19 PM
It looks good so far. I suggest maybe ending with his arms raising up and then spreading out and down. As though he is really trying to appeal to the people - reaching out to them. Its hard for me to explain without showing. If i get some time I'll draw it out and post it. Good stuff and keep working on it.
Harregarre
08-18-2006, 06:51 PM
Hmm, well I like the movement, I think because of the amount of text your eyes tend to focus on the head and since he has a bit of a sad look on his face it feels a bit 'blah'. Maybe just let him smile, you don't have to lipsync him yet but I think when you have the general feel of the face it makes connecting the face to the body language easier. Now the two are sort of contradictionary, I think.:shrug:
fightingthumb
08-18-2006, 09:22 PM
great thanks guys! ill try to implement your suggestions
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