Moom animation test

[Harregarre]

Not a lot to critique on yet. What is happening in the scene because all I see now is him putting his hand in front of his mouth and sort of slides his chair back in fear. I think you might want to show what is scaring him, either by adding a part inbetween showing the scaring thing or changing the angle on the entire animation so you don't lose momentum.

[TomerEp]

Hmm whats happening in the scene is that he is getting bored and yawning, and then the light should go off and he should fall off his chair..

[Harregarre]

Hmm, I'm sorry but it's kinda hard to see because there are no real extremes, it's more like a flow of constant moves. Maybe choose some more recognizable extremes.

[CGTalk Moderation]

This thread has been automatically closed as it remained inactive for 12 months. If you wish to continue the discussion, please create a new thread in the appropriate forum.