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Ntt
08-17-2006, 11:05 AM
Hello,







http://130.89.160.146/cgtalk/versie16aug2.jpg


This is the scene i made! It is near finished i think. What do you think about it? Any critique is very welcome!

It is a place in between two buildings of an old factory were all kind of pipes connect the buildings.

GreeTz Rik!
Bogged
08-17-2006, 01:55 PM
The brick textures are kind of stretched and it looks like maxwell gave you some artifacts.

I like the part with the pipes though, I'm not too fond of the buildings, however.

Good luck.

Cheers
Gerd
MrBrick
08-17-2006, 04:17 PM
Its looking pretty good.

The brick textures look like they need some work. They are a bit stretched and the bump in them dosn't look like they follow between the bricks.

Also- the roof texture needs some bump and spec. It looks a little too low res.

Great concept- textures just need work.
ThomasAn.
08-17-2006, 05:42 PM
... and it looks like maxwell gave you some artifacts.

Where did you find that info ? ... (This does not look like a Maxwell) ...
Ntt
08-17-2006, 06:48 PM
Good points! I am using 3dMax 8 with Vray by the way... This is my first scene and i started with the bricks :) I ll make those better tomorow and give you guys an update!

GreeTz Rik!
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