Flash Dc comic

[JackZhang]

coming out nicely!
3 things:

1st, adam's apple is way too big. it really looks like he swallowed an apple
2nd, the way you model the mouth and chin is, emm, unique/stylish (saying it nicely) or, repeative. If you look at Mr.G, the farmer, the second fish head, the chins are always got this kinda of Danny Trejo feeling.
http://turalyon.free.fr/blog/Kingpin/danny_trejo.png
such chin feels a lot more oriental, sometimes even villain; in another word, less herotic, less justices. i'm not sure if that suits flash.
3rd, the end of deltoid muscle has a weird bump.

yet, great work, amazing speed. keep it up.

[PhilOsirus]

Where is the update?:)

It's a good start. My only crit would be that the wings are maybe a bit too small, but that's a personal thing!:)

[Vimmy]

hehe well i don't have to much time to work in 3 the last days but tomorow and after i have some break time so i will continue il, and about some problem on the body and proportion i will modified it when the mesh will be done anyways for the moment the upper body was complet and i have make a lot of modification on the mesh so i will post more update in the next days, thank for reply guys!

[Vimmy]

So i have 70 % of the mesh are done , but just for fun i work more in detail on the torso od Flash , this is not the final shape i will restart it when all the mesh will be done !

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/4966/frontfungy8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[grafi]

Looks good, a few anatomy issues though.

[Vimmy]

update of the base mesh i will work more on the back of the leg ! so this is it!

Comment are welcome


[/url][url="http://imageshack.us"]http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/1855/flashup2yu2.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Vimmy]

Starting to do uv for preparing to zbrush ! after the rigging sure ..
only the costume not UV of the Hand.
http://img169.imageshack.us/img169/2424/uvnv5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[julienN]

Wow Very impressive work!

I think the legs looks a little bit fat, especialy the bottom of the legs.

[mc-fleury]

not bad but he remenber me of a fat guy now with these big legs. the shape of the back from the back view needs works...the overall model needs work...but legs need more work :p. i would really like to see this dude without the wire, please. keep it up.

[DarknosAurae]

Very nice work Vinny. Although his legs look kinda fat, this is because the transition between his thighs into his calfs isn't noticacbly different. Looks like he has fat calfs. Other then that looks good.

[Vimmy]

commment guys so i start to work quickly on the pose before starting to do the high mesh ! the uv was done to... ( not work on th hand pose for the moment !

http://img171.imageshack.us/img171/9611/posekx8.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[hitch24]

looking cool, what program are you using?

[JackZhang]

already posing him, man i haven't visit you for days.
the fat leg is probably the most obvious issue since many have mentioned it. neck/shoulder area still have issue, like adam's apple and neck muscles. i assume you haven't fix them yet last time we talked about it. the shoulder itself is kinda narrow. rather than that, everything else is fine. keep up the good work

[Vimmy]

Hitch for the program i'm use maya

Thank jack against for reply so i rework on the pose and make some correction but this is not the final shape of the costume of flash for the moment it only in subdivision 2 ( and not work on the hands , boots, face.

http://img375.imageshack.us/img375/4328/pose1qj4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[jesterjoker]

Hey, nice work! I'm already liking the detail on him. I can't wait to see him fully textured!

BTW I'm featuring your work on The 3dBuzz's The Daily News. Sept 4th Edition.

[Vimmy]

Heheh thank for reply jesterjoker and thank for the daily new ! so i decide to change the pose for create a more dark style final image ( For the moment i think i will modelised the enemie of Flash , Spectre , to pu on the final Picture ). hope you like the new pose the have some bug on the wire i will modified it

http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/544/newposemy1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Vimmy]

So this is my final pose but not mi final mesh i started to work on the costume i will make some muscle modification !

http://img243.imageshack.us/img243/9821/newpose4xu7.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[RenisanceX]

i think your proportions are off mainly the length of the upper torso

[grafi]

Hey man, looks really good, you definatly have something going here. I think the proportions are off in the lower portion of the body, not the upper. The hips are a little too narrow and the legs are a little too wide. I also think that you got some fake back muscles, but thats okay it looks cool anyways hehe :)
Good job, keep at it!

[Vimmy]

Hehe thank RenisanceX and Grafi for comment Well i decide to redo a new Base mesh with better for proportion so comment are welcome ( i not finish all the upper body i will add more detail in the future) hope you like ! sorry big image!!

i will modelised all the human body before start to work with cloth !

http://img155.imageshack.us/img155/2363/newmeshyj5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[julienN]

Woow the modeling looks really great!

Very impressive!

[Baker17]

Hi man..

this has the potential to be a really good model, however a few anatomy issues are what is letting it down at the moment. you have some good core shapes for the muscle groups, and feel if the proportions were better addresed you would better the overall look. area's to especially look at are the biceps, deltoids and pectorils... as well as the shape of the legs, especially the quads, knee's and calf muscles...

i have done a paint over, but won't post it unless you want me to... some people get offended, and i merely want to help you on what could be a great model... i loved flash growing up... and you have a good start here.

[Havoc89]

looks awesome, cant wait to see more!

Nice work Vimmy

[gra7]

hey man.. awsome stuff again!
love the anatomy that u put in yours models!

cya!

[kenshinw95]

I dunno.. He kinda looks a little too husky/beefy for the Flash.
I recall his body kinda being like Spider-Man. Lean, yet muscular.
Kinda fits with his power of Hyper-Speed.

[Vimmy]

So thank everyone for great comment i appreaciate it , well i decide to change my super heros model to a another SPECTRE ! so the base mesh was done. hope you like it !

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/8041/basemeszq1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Vimmy]

So i do a render of the base mesh !

http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/1649/render1ne4.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[gra7]

awsome man.. ure getting better every time!

[Vimmy]

thank for reply my friend , i appreciate that ! so this a a screenshot of the old and new base mesh ! comment!

sorry big image!

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/5544/oldnewbg9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[mc-fleury]

wtf, it looks great! i just cant fugure out how you have managed to get that second attempt to look that great. you first attempt looked like crap, anyway keep it up!

[Vimmy]

So i make some modification and i do a render of my base mesh so this is it !
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/2618/dd1mv9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Vimmy]

Not comment ?

[julienN]

I really enjoy your new mesh, body and especialy the legs are more realistic than the old.

biceps (perhaps not enough detailed)
the nape of the neck (in my opinion details looks strange)
and between pectoral and abdominal this part is perhaps not enough detailed too.

But your model looks great!

[rasmusW]

hey samuel!

great update, much better than the first one.
i only got one crit for now (-just did a quick glanse). his hips and obliques (-i think they are called) are too narrow.

-r

[jclepev]

Nice improvements Vimmy, my comments would be, make the rib cage wider and yes, the obliques are too narrow.

Luck!

[Vimmy]

hey thank everyone for good comment ! i will make some modification and i will post more picture !

[Vimmy]

Today i starting to do the rig on my human mesh ! but i don't finish it anyways ! for fun a do a quick speed model hope you like iy hehe !

http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/2937/speed5mc6.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[PhilOsirus]

Hey Vimmy!

Just wanted to say that this is a major improvement over the previous mesh, can't wait to see how it will look in the end!

[Vimmy]

hey yeah thank Phil ! so my main idea was to created a Super heros like dc or marvel but i think i will draw my own design for the character so concept coming soon !

[grafi]

Great job man, Nice anatomy, nice form, the only thing i think is a ill off is the head, but it doesnt look too far off. Keep it up! :thumbsup:

[Vimmy]

thank grafi for comment , so after a short moment i post this new screen
the new mesh and some rig test ( not totaly done ), after that i will choose my final pose for my super hero!

http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/3606/pose2iv0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/9590/pose3xe1.jpg (http://imageshack.us)
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/9265/pose1wr5.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Squash-n-Stretch]

Ooh the last pose is SEXXAYYYY!

You have too much talent for a 17 year old ;) Keep going. Do a really energetic pose of him running.

[grafi]

Looks great, I still think the head shoudl be a different shape though. Heres a skull so you can check out the shape. I think it needs to be a little more round up there. Keep it up, your doing great! :)

http://www.gwc.maricopa.edu/class/bio201/skull/skul2.jpg

http://www.gwc.maricopa.edu/class/bio201/skull/skul3a.jpg

[Vimmy]

ok thank against guys for good comment i like that ! hehe so i make a 360 turnable of a pose ( NOT THE FINAL ) but antways , if you want to take a look ? Also i make the modification of the head shape , thank Grafi :thumbsup:!


CLICK ON PICTURE FOR DOWNLOAD THIS ON RAPIDSHAPE 13MO!
Quicktime files click here ! (%09http://rapidshare.de/files/34438918/Untitled8.mov.html)
Techsmith codec

http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/4090/360vg7.jpg (http://rapidshare.de/files/34386329/Untitled.avi.html)


(http://rapidshare.de/files/34386329/Untitled.avi.html)

[iworkat]

I was jazzed to see a 360 turntable of your char... downloaded the movie, and it told me I didn't have the codec??? hunh??? An I a dork or is the file broken???

[Vimmy]

ok i will recodec the file because i use techsmith codec so i will change it ! 5 min hehe

[Vimmy]

ok this is the quicktime file (%09http://rapidshare.de/files/34438918/Untitled8.mov.html)

http://rapidshare.de/files/34438918/Untitled8.mov.html

[grafi]

Hey man, looks great, can't wait for the animation. :)

[FastFood]

May you share your experience for character modeling? thank you!

[Vimmy]

well i think i will don't do a animation more a 360 trunable model with also a final render with texture and all the stuff i do rigging only for praticed , and for more future reference body mesh pose ! anyways i will check that ! :thumbsup:

[webhead]

I think you're doing a very nice job so far, but I must admit, I prefer the thinner, streamlined Flash of the earlier comics. I just don't think he looks believable as being built for speed when he's a big, bulked up bodybuilder - My personal preference, anyway.

[prophylactic]

Congrats!, great work, very detailed char..! i can't wait to c him running..!

[Vimmy]

thank webhead and prophylactic for comment , but of my super heros i will change the model i will don't do flash but Spectre , have more muscular proportion body !

[iworkat]

so you aren't going to finish the flash character??? I think it's worth while!

[Vimmy]

So i started to do the texture of my Spectre model but i also do a quick speed model , so hope you like it !


Another view in my portfolio!

http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/7977/speed444ma0.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[Vimmy]

Ok so i started to work more on the cloth and all env. i will post more screen when the model will be done!! hope you like that!

all do some lightning test and particles test

and the ugly cylinder in back is a tower lol ( just for positioning ) :thumbsup:
http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/5920/wipspectredf9.jpg (http://imageshack.us)

[NyneDown]

This is looking really sick man, I cant believe you're only 17 years old?!? Dude...I barely knew how to turn a pc on at that age, really amazing what you've accomplished so far. Pretty inspiring stuff....keep it up, cant wait to see the finished product. ;)

[KeiKasai]

He's really looking great! great job.

[KeiKasai]

(LOL) sorry for the double post I didnt realized the message was sent cause I had an error message anyway I really liked your work and can't wait for your update.

[Vimmy]

hehe double post ! thank every one for great comment, it cool :) i do my best for sure so update coming soon !

[stouckol]

hi vimmy !
what a nice model ! i like it so much....
i want to model like u :rolleyes:
lol, good luck :)
by

[KeiKasai]

oh btw, I'm also doing a DC character " Wonder Woman" so far I've only done her face/head and i'll be doing her body soon check her and tell me what you think?

http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?t=412142

Cheers:)

[Gkaine]

impressive work vimmy. keep it up

[Vimmy]

thank you guys for comment, i will post more update soon!

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