BMW Tuner Z4 Crits Please!

[kogden]

its coming along well!

i have a few comment cuase i know how it feel not to get comments on your work :(.

1.the model on th good part seems pretty nice. (i cant model cars). i like it.

2. i would lose the black background!!! you have a dark car on a black background. no silluet value. a gradient from light greg to white maybe. just like a showroom?? but this is your choice altametly.

3. the reflection seems to reflect the BLACK environment. i could be wrong though. try using a environment map.

4 the seats assuming they are leather, are too shiny turn down the spec!!! and put some bump in there.(though it could have bump but the compression is average, maybe its a youtube thing??) get a nice render and put it on www.savefile.com, agin your choice.

5. on the whole its coming along well and i might just be being a pantdantic nerd lol. Again what i have said is up to you to change, and it is WIP not finished work sooooooo i'm gonna finish with i like it alot well done.


BTW what program you use? ohh and what renderer. cause if you change some of the thing i mentioned its gonna effect other parts of the scene :( but there are ways around that.

good luck :)

[Jerobi]

thanks for the crits. I know my texturing isn't great, thats one of my weak points actually so thanks for the advice. I modeled it in Maya using the regular ol' Maya renderer. Actually, rendering is another one of my weak points, heh. Just trying to build up my modeling skills and then move on from there. But thanks again for the advice, I'll definitely take them into consideration on my new car that I'm building which I'll post up later on.

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