pencil drawing a woman (nudity)

[mmwizard]

Heigh,

looks great, nice body nice tits but only the Jaw isn't complety corect. If i where you i would shorten the line a bit at the chin.
And you are showing the head 3/4, usaly you'll be able to see a litle off the cheek at here right...

The hands are the most dificult part and you've done a great job here, only the arms are a litlebit small. Of course there are many anorexia models rightnow and therfore is this a question of taste i think.

Overal i prefer a bit more fat on a lady.

I hope i helped you out a here, and i have to say that you did a great job here. Next time try a light grey paper and use some white chalk to hilight the lighter parts. That gives you're drawing a more finished look.

greetings

MMwizard

[DimSum]

Nice job !
Unless some anatomy 'details'...in fact lots of things. The arms r too short (arm's length usualy = 3 heads, until the wrist).
Her left eye is a bit too big...and her pelvis is not large enough. Women have this particularity that their pelvis r usually larger than the shoulders.
These r natural errors, continue to train urself and within some few months u'll do very great thing ;) Impatient to see more further work from u :thumbsup:

[tomG]

hi guys

thanks alot for your critics .... i fully agree with you! :rolleyes:

here i have another drawing (i think there are still anatomic and perspective problems)


http://mypage.bluewin.ch/opacity/art/drawing/retrospect.jpg

[Springheel]

Both of them have a lot of potential, there's just a few anatomical details that are a little off. Are you using references for these?

[tomG]

hi Springheel

thanks! i saw your homepage ..... its amazing!!! yes i used airbrush gallery books from michael moebius.

[tomG]

here another one!

http://mypage.bluewin.ch/opacity/art/drawing/face.jpg

[pestopedo]

I think its good but to me the hips need to come down just a litte.
Other than that its a nice piece.

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