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Raja-X
08-13-2006, 09:59 AM
http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/163003/163003_1155463185_medium.jpg

Title: Chopper
Name: Rajeel Hussain
Country: United Kingdom
Software:

Just an image of a chopper i did in 3ds max during my free time, all crit welcome, but please go easy, lol. I got inspired by watchin programs on tv of choppers and stuff, so decided to have a crack at making one myself.
Zahik
08-13-2006, 12:54 PM
It does look good model though but the atmosphere or your sense of lighting and also the presentation way have killed it badly :sad: .. You should work even harder to get the desired results! Still, I like your bike man!
Raja-X
08-13-2006, 03:31 PM
thx for the feedback dude, jst gettin accepted on the forums is great for me, didnt expect it to get in.
Ill work on the overall scene, hope if i do suttin agn, itll turn out betta.
thx anyhoo. :scream:
descoiatorul
08-13-2006, 08:03 PM
The work is pretty good, but it's not finished. I think you should have posted it in WIP section, considering that a chopper without a handle bar :wise: .
descoiatorul
08-13-2006, 08:07 PM
The work is pretty good, but it's not finished. I think you should have posted it in WIP section, considering that a chopper without a handle bar is just a chopper frame with engine and wheels :rolleyes: .
tim99
08-13-2006, 10:08 PM
The work is pretty good, but it's not finished. I think you should have posted it in WIP section, considering that a chopper without a handle bar is just a chopper frame with engine and wheels :rolleyes: .
it has handlebars
Per-Anders
08-14-2006, 05:58 AM
Hi, I have to agree the work really isn't finished, this belongs in the WIP section. The rendering and lighting is all over the shop, bleached out and unexciting, with aliasing artifacts all over.

The model design doesn't make sense either; Where's the gas tank? How's it standing up? Where are the lights?

The angle chosen hides the handlebars (that would be down at the knees or something), Compositionally this is just randomly placed, you need to focus and think about the image itself, where is the observer, what are they focusing on, what is the meaning of your image are you trying to show something fast? Gleaming? What? As it's just a study once again I'd say WIP area is where this belongs.
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