WIPcharacter/ Fan Art / The darkness

[thebest]

wohooo hola amigo waiting for u to rock the place
can`t wait to see updates:bounce:

[rattlesnake]

hello friend..here i post an update:

http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/body.txt

[rattlesnake]

hi again..well i think i need some advice on the anatomy, this is supossed to be a hero type character, heres what i have:

http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/bh.txt

[thebest]

he looks good for me lol u know I`am not good at anatomy things but I feel that his ears are too small :wise:

[Sully]

Good start the proportions are pretty much spot on my only crit at this stage is that his obliques need some attention or love handle region, hes a little undefined round the hip area. I myself always have a problem here to suppose its cos your not seeing that part of the body on people normally unless you attend life drawing classed on a regular basis..good start though your model has good potential..

[rattlesnake]

thebest: oh youre right about ears my friend...ill make them bigger... thanx:bounce::thumbsup:


Sully: hello, thanx for the good advice..ill get some better references and pay more attention to that area..thanx :)

[rattlesnake]

other little update on the face...next ill add the mask and add much more expression, my version of this character wont look like comic drawing...im going to pretend that im creating a real person (actor) wearing "the darkness" suit...


http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/heada.txt

[thebest]

man u are rocking the place cool work keep going :thumbsup:

[rattlesnake]

Thanx Tony : heres my other update..mask modeling

http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/mask.txt

[Neeno]

Great man well done... Not sure if you know but there is a game being Produced call the Darkness based on the character your designing and concept for the XB360.

keep it up

[thebest]

doing a great job amigo :thumbsup:

[ts-falcon]

man this looks awesome, love the mask so far! the onl thing bugging me is how toned this guy is. unless you work out 24/7 i dont think many people would be this defined, there is little body fat on him. to me when the muscles are so tight like that the skin looks a bit thin, but its only minor, the anatomy seems to be great. keep it up!

[rattlesnake]

Neeno: hey man..thats great news!!..i did a little search about it...but didnt find any image of the character on 3d :(...maybe is better that way...i wont be influenced by it ;)

thanx


thebest: gracias :)



ts_falcon: hello thanx，u are right bout the body..ill make the necessary to make it look cool...i think i will start with it soon







and well some minor tweaks to the head ..just to make it look more like the comic character..but still real proportions..


http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/tweaks.txt

[rattlesnake]

well heres an other little update...is a beggining on the armour:)

http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/holes.txt

[rattlesnake]

hello .one more little update on the body:

http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/armour.txt

[betito]

I love it, Great work so far Yorch, I'll keep an eye for this one....."

[rattlesnake]

hola..

thanx a lot for the support my friend ...:)

[rattlesnake]

well i will start with hands now..and continue with more body details after that ...


here is how the body looks now

http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/body1.txt

[rattlesnake]

if theres some one following this thread:

Hi again, thanx for following:)

well an other little update...didnt know how i was going to create hands ..but i think im getting a nice result, let me know your thoughts ;)

http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/armwire.txt

http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/armlit.txt

http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/armfront.txt

http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/armback.txt


http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/armbig.txt

[Bogged]

The hands look decent considering you didn't know how to make them. I'd suggest scaling them up only at the joints, though, beacuse yours are looking too uniform to be real fingers.

By the way, can we see a reference pic of the character you're doing? I really love the holes that you put in the mesh and I wann see what's gonna go in there :thumbsup: .

Cheers
Gerd

[rattlesnake]

hello ...yeah sure...here ull find lots of reference pictures...

http://marcsilvestriart.com/darkness.htm


thanx for the advice..ill try it:thumbsup:

[rattlesnake]

hello, other little update , more detail to arms

:)

http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/armsdet.txt

[betito]

Esto se va viendo cada vez mejor bro', me imagino que el cabello va a ser un gran reto ya que este personaje es de melena larga, ...no conozco el sistema de cabello de 3d max, pero los sistemas de melena de maya han mejorado mucho desde la version 7, ya no he sufrido tanto en esos menesteres.

En cuanto a la proporcion, yo en lo personal alargaria un poco el cuello porque a lo mejor se ve muy corto cuando le pongas la melena, pero no se tu..."

Ojala cuando lo termines lo llegue a ver Silvestri, mandaselo por correo, quien quita lo ve y le late...." :wip:

[rattlesnake]

perdon double post

[rattlesnake]

betito: Hola :wavey:, si lo del cabello me preocupa, estuve haciendo unos tests y nomas no me queda..
pero bueno le voy a dar un descanso a eso y voy a seguir con los pies, luego hago otro intento...
y si es buena idea lo de mandarselo a Silvestri, esperemos que acabe bien esto para que no se decepcione:buttrock:

gracias por el apoyo man

[shinnokSK]

waw !! great
I will see your thread every day. Keep working :thumbsup:

[Abaddon]

Looking sweet sofar, I love the comic and was actually going to make the darkness myself. I ended up changing the model into a rogue for the blizzard comp, so will be very interested in where you take this. No crits at the moment, the proportions kinda need to be like that for this character.

Im gonna be making the witchblade girl at some point, could do a joint scene oneday if she turns out. :thumbsup:

[Climax]

Great to see you moving polygons again my friend! and in such a nice form, good job the darkness is looking dark already haha :thumbsup: keep it up! :bounce:

[rattlesnake]

shinnokSK: thanx man, i think im moving a bit slow in this project, but i apreciate youre following :)

Abaddon: hey , thats a great idea i really hope u can make that Witchblade character so we can make a cool compo using both characters...:thumbsup:


Climax: Hello my friend , great to read your words again...thanx:love:

[rattlesnake]

ok..the modeling on the main character is done, i will add some organic growing shapes aat the end along with textures..but this is taking some shape now...comments are welcome

http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/model.txt

[thebest]

wow amigo u are rocking this forum man u are doing awsome job keep going
no crits :bounce:

[rattlesnake]

:bounce:thanx my friend:)

[mosconariz]

Great job again, the rigging looks very good, the modeling is very clean and detailed, the hair however is still a little weird, great progress mate, keep rockinnnnnnnnnnnn!

[jdsb]

great progress yorch!!http://forums.cgsociety.org/images/icons/icon10.gif , everythng looks great so far, keep it coming.seeya on xbox live.... http://forums.cgsociety.org/images/icons/icon10.gif

[rattlesnake]

mosconariz: hehe thanx my friend!!, lol yeah he need some hair fixing..:buttrock:


jdsb: haha...:thank u my friend...and sure ..i will meet u there bro!!:applause: im feeling lucky today..i will win this time..hahaha:D

[Neeno]

looks awesome man

diggin your concept

[rattlesnake]

Neeno: thanx man :)
:thumbsup:

[rattlesnake]

well here are some textures to the head..still need to refine that, but i wanted to show :)

http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/headtexture.txt

[keetmun]

Wow Jorge it's great to see new work from you mate! Texturing is looking really good so far. Just a thought, is the neck covered by the armour? Cos I don't think the front neck area on its own will look like that... but other than that it looks awesome, can't wait to see another rattlesnake masterpiece!

Cheers mate
:buttrock:

[rattlesnake]

:wavey: friend..really great to cu here...first of all a big Hello!


yeah i see the neck issue...is supoosed to be skin so it need some fixing..really thanx for visiting mate, please come here more often

cu around mate:thumbsup:

[keetmun]

please come here more often



Haha yes I'm guilty as charged... I have to serve 2 years in my country's army soon, but I promise I'll post a lot more soon heh heh... Now I realise how much I miss talking to everybody.:sad:

[Hooch]

Dale Dale Jorge! que vas Super bien :thumbsup:
Queremos ver mas!!

[rattlesnake]

keetmun: Ill be waiting for your posts my friend:bounce::scream::)

Hooch: gracias man...:bounce: a ver que te parece el siguiente update :)

[rattlesnake]

ok some more advance on texturing, also trying a new way of hair creation, i think this is much better since render 50 times faster and looks better..
and testing the pose again....ill make some environment next ;)

http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/colortest.txt

[thebest]

rocking as always :scream:

[reedomatic01]

Nice texturing. This character is coming along quite nicely. Keep up the good work!!!

[FlaminGlow]

you have my 5 *****, very good job keep it up.BTW i like the new hair style more and the way you creat it, sorry i didn't read the whole thread what are you planning to do with him?:eek:

[PhuongDPh]

I really like the model !
Good work !
Keep it up !

[living_for_cg]

thats soooooo great work... the textured one has become fantastic.:thumbsup:

[PoctiPikasso]

Looking forward to see the final render:)

[rattlesnake]

thebest::) thank u friend!

reedomatic: thanx mate im happy u like it.


FlaminGlow: Hi my old friend, thanx for the stars!.. im happy to see u here :) , well i think im going to recreate a "Marc Silvestri" cover art but in 3d of course.:):wavey:




LATROMMI-SUINEG: thanx , ill keep working hard on this one


living_for_cg: thanx a lot, i remember your "journey" challenge entry , really a very cool image, is great to read your words :)

[keetmun]

Wow mate... I got nothing much to say... Just here to push you forward!:buttrock:

[eddieellis]

Hey Mate, thats sooo cool,

Ive just finsihed working on the game, so its great to see soem fan art appearing :thumbsup:

[Abaddon]

Looking good. Soething seems odd to me in the pose, I think it may be the deformations around the joints perhaps. His thighs and shins seen long in that shot.

Did u model the new hair?

[rattlesnake]

keetmun: hello my friend...thanx a lot..:bounce:


eddieellis: Hello man...wow cool to hear you worked on the game...i cant wait to play it..ill be fan number one of it!:)

Abaddon: hi, yeah pose need to be fixed ...thanx for the help, ..and about the hair yeah ..i did planes for modeling it...i think it work better now...



THANX GUYS

[rattlesnake]

Well creature number one WIP is here...need to create 12 little friends...i need to move faster now!


http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/creature1head.txt
http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/creature1hand.txt
http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/creature1handb.txt
http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/creature1all.txt

[gpepper]

Cool character Jorge !
Nice modeling and texturing !

[rattlesnake]

gpepper: thanx my friend :)

[TES]

looks great!

[rattlesnake]

well heres an other little update..i been a bit busy last week and weekend with some stuff so i wasnt able to really work on this...but heres a little update:wavey:

still A LOT work to do

LOL i just saw the poor left foot is broken..haha, well i will pose it in the right pose next update :)

http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/creature1comp.txt

[rattlesnake]

and well heres a link to the original art Work Made By Marc Silvestri for the comic book, is the one im using as reference an trying to recreate as a 3d image:
http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/1.jpg

lot of work to do as u may notice :)

[thebest]

wow amigo cool work u are getting near your aim keep going :thumbsup:

[rattlesnake]

thebest: Hello friend, thanx ...yeah this is closer now, but still lots of work..hehe

[rattlesnake]

well after two very busy weeks im back to post some update, here is the second creature modeling...started from an special base mesh supposed to handle about 8 different face and body adjustments, that way i will create the reamining creatures much faster...hope it work :P

http://jorgelescale.com/wipshots/darkness/creature2face.txt

[darkdreams]

Wow! No sabía que hubiera más mexicanos por aquí :thumbsup:

[rattlesnake]

darkdreams: hola, pues un saludo!..:):wavey:

[jdsb]

wow, very nice work mate, keep going:bounce::thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup::thumbsup:

[DaddyMack]

Aychiwawa! Top knotch work here mate... Rock on

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