Character: June- Centerfold [Female Nudity]

[Dearmad]

her upper arm is a tad too short- even with her shoulders back as they are to emphasis her chest. She'd have to have her shoulders up more for her elbow to fall that short of her waist.

I'd tighten the ankle a bit and define it more (shading or highlights).

Pretty good overall proportions though, not overly exaggerated while still allowing her to look glamorous.:thumbsup:

[Alice]

thats so true, tanx! (something was wrong but I couldnt quite put my finger on how to correct it.) Guess one gets blind after working at the same thing for too long.
Will correct it when i get home (in march :thumbsdow )
:beer:
/Alice

[cuse]

i like it :)

her head looks a little small maybe, but very nice textures :surprised



cuse

[sfx]

:applause: :applause: :applause:

[Dr BeN]

hi .. like the picture very well .... just the lower part of the stomach looks strange .....


could u post the link of the wip thread ? i really like to see the reference

she kinda reminds me of katie price ;)

:) nice work :thumbsup:

[Alice]

Ben- It prolly is, the original thread has a lot of broken links due to a hostchange, (But the ref is a pornstar with a stringbikini and flowers above the... delicious part) just search for it in the 2d artwork section. (got a crappy 28.8modem during the evnings)

And tanx, i will look over her again and adust the things thats sticking out, guess its that kinda thing that cant be "finished" :/

[Dearmad]

realize that if you lengthen her upper arm a bit you'll probably also need to increase the bend at her elbow slightly in order to keep the hand correctly positioned. This should work to your advantage, as it will emphasize that special way women's arms bend that men's typically don't.

good luck!:thumbsup:

[mihkeltt]

my eye says that there's something wrong with her lower part of the stomach. other than that- fabulos.

[visgoth]

Not bad, is this the reference image you used?

[Rice ManX]

Katie Price ;)

[Nurb'd]

nice picture

after studying it for 5 minutes, I would say so visgoth :p

[Alice]

Originally posted by visgoth
Not bad, is this the reference image you used?

Jepps, most defenitly so.
:)

[caulfield]

Dang I wish all the ladies had nipples like that.

I'd like to download that.

[cuse]

you know i nearly said you must have been referencing jordan, only cause the size of her, erm, valuables, arnt exactly common.

:)




cuse

[erikals]

Ehrm... you wouldn't happen to have more pictures like that visgoth? For reference I mean??

Erik

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