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Scratrat
08-03-2006, 12:02 PM
http://features.cgsociety.org/gallerycrits/236050/236050_1154606563_medium.jpg

Title: Constantine-k.reeves-fanpic
Name: Andreas Griebl
Country: Germany
Software: Photoshop

Here is another pic I made for trying a portrait.
I made it in Photoshop with mouse.
The base of this image is a scene from the movie "constantine".
I did this just for fun and I hope u'll like this.

don't be shy to post your c&c, I could only learning more...
Imaginer
08-05-2006, 02:12 AM
Hi,

No comments yet, so here are mine... The overall portrait is well done, because we can actually recognize him ;). Other than that, my comments will really depend on what kind of style you want to achieve. If you want to achieve realistic look, then you need to improve some things. If you want to keep the "airbrush painted" effect, then I guess you're fine. I just have some comments about the hair and eyebrows, they are too bright (especially the eyebrows). But I guess that if you change them, it will modify the face expression and look...

And by the way, I think it's well done for a mouse only painting :thumbsup:!
Scratrat
08-07-2006, 07:14 AM
Thank you for comment!

Yes, I wanted to look like an airbrushed work, so on your comment I'd done it right...
It was my first portrait it fits my imagination and the first I'd done at least at the computer.
So I'll go on like that and trying to make future pics in various styles to learn more about computer-illustration...
Imaginer
08-07-2006, 07:27 AM
Okay, glad to hear. I have one critic though: the mouth, and especially the lower lip looks wrong. You should try to correct it.

Good luck for your next projects.
Scratrat
08-07-2006, 03:26 PM
Yeah I see, you mean the shadow under the lower lip, huh? And the how is it called (?)- the space between the upper lip and the beginning of the nose..?- is to bright.. That will be corrected in the next days...

I'll try to darken the hair and eybrows a bit and some little changes on the eyes.

Hey and thank you for crits! I'm very glad to get some crits about this pic...
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