CGTalk - Apple Worm image

Rome

03-14-2002, 08:12 PM

Any constructive critiques? Done with Max 4 and a little Photoshop.

schmu_20mol

03-14-2002, 08:56 PM

pretty nice...but I think the apple is too clean...you know not much bump and characteristic cuts or something like that ;)

Joel Hooks

03-14-2002, 10:08 PM

The apple isn't really shapped correctly, specifically at the bottom. It is also one solid color. i think the catipillar and the apple could both use some texture mapping. The knife is extra thin like it is made of paper. it needs more mass.

Good start!

Ls3D

03-15-2002, 12:00 AM

In addition to the other suggestions how about a light raytrace (3 - 15) with a noise mask on the apple (reflection) so that it picks up light from the towel,.. or a soft attenuated omni below.

-Shea
www.Ls3D.com

P.S. eating an apple right now, but it is a fuji!

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