View Full Version : robot in snow
07-29-2006, 08:48 PM
A work in progress picture almost finished...
Made in Max. Render Vray. Compositing Photoshop.
so c&c are welcome!
07-29-2006, 09:13 PM
I really like the idea with the robot in the snow. Not many robots in snow these days ya know...but yah like the robot design and the reflectetions of his hand trough the icy thingie is pretty cool. But something that would make the whole concept better is if you could see more of the backround...not just the white light..but a more detailed snow layout...maybe the robots wheel traces in the snow...that u can trace back to the horisont or whatever. Thats about all the help i can give you...sorry im a rookie in graphics.:shrug:
07-30-2006, 12:16 AM
Love the model and most of the render. Only critique from me is the lack of tracks in the snow behind the robot, just like Robert said.
07-31-2006, 08:50 PM
I always use MentalRay for occlusion.
I change the background. I try to put some tracks behind him but they are not very apparent ... :sad:
I'll try to put more details for the robot !
SocramOsnofla and RobertC88 tanks for comments thats helps me a lot. :)
07-31-2006, 09:35 PM
Awww, he looks sad! XD
As for criticism... something about the chest plate bothers me, but I'm not sure what... it looks too flat, or something... Other than that, he looks great! :)
07-31-2006, 09:54 PM
Really nice work. I love the picture, and the robot's cool to and looks nice and clean.
Only this looks a tad weird to me (the corners look weird with the rest of the ice):
But then again, that might just be me :D
As for suggestions... I really don't have any. Maybe you could put some frost on the robot if that sounds like a good idea? I mean, it clearly is cold over there!
Oh, and the snow looks great, too!
07-31-2006, 10:17 PM
i like it~ beautiful render.
just one logical problem. he has been traveling in the snow for a distance. i think there should be some snow on his legs/wheels? no?
08-03-2006, 03:18 PM
Yah i agree to jack here
08-03-2006, 08:36 PM
I have to finish robot's textures and add some details.
Revvels: I changed egdes and smoth a little the ice blocks, but that's not enough... :sad:
JackZhang and RobertC88: I'll add some snow under wheels and ice blocks.
Thanks for comments! :D
08-03-2006, 08:50 PM
nice work man...
08-03-2006, 08:50 PM
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