Character Woman: Niki

[scott2600]

another:

http://www.davidfinlay.net/niki_2.jpg

[Grayscale]

She looks very nice. I like the pose alot. Great work. On to the next one. The pants are really a nice design and the added wing design at the bottom of the pant legs adds to the overall character. I like this one alot. Great job.

[ill_logic]

i think the face needs a bit more work. other than that right on.
:applause: :thumbsup: :applause:
:surprised -ill

[Oltarz]

Nice, I like it, but I think you should give her more space between jacket and breast...

:thumbsup:

[Rudity]

She's cute.

I think the jacket should droop off her breasts though.


Later
Rudity

[kwshipman]

why dont real women where cloes like this?!

I also think that the jacket should be hanging from the brests not clinging to her ribs. Either that, or have the bottom of it connected together.

[sad]

sexy! the jacket has already been mentioned and i think the hair could use some enhancement. but all together quite good!

[WiltedEnds]

being that the hair is toonshaded it's going to be kind of hard to "enhance"..i think the breasts give it a good fantasy feel...and who would want a fantasy woman's breasts to sag??????good job scott

[Dreamwave]

sexay :)

[fleedawg]

Looks really good. I agree about the face though. It looks ok, but then again it looks kinda lifeless. But great job all around.

[Dr BeN]

nice so far .. strange sahder ... do something with the stomach ... looks to flat for me

:D

[Heber]

cool character! i like this one, only crit would be the shader :/ but yeah the modelling and all is very good overall :scream:

[scott2600]

Thanks all for the cratiques and comments!!
My main goal with this character was to be a sexy stylized fantisy girl. I really was not striving for realism which would explain the shaders. I also understand that normally the jacket would fall off the breasts. Originally I did have the jacket like that, but it took away from the sexy image I was trying to achieve. I understand that her face is kinda plain and the reason is that I am in my last month of school at FullSail and I do not have time to complete blend shapes for her, but as soon as I get a chance I will give her face some character. I am currently working on another model so I will have at least 4 on my demo reel.

Thanks all for the Comments I really do appreciate them and hope to hear more!!!:thumbsup:

[slice56]

lookin' good man! is it me or does her head look too large from the back view? Looks good though. Nice job scott!

[typeA]

im gona go buy that same outfit for my gf right now:drool: :bounce: :bounce:

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