FusionDG
01-20-2003, 11:41 PM
:wip: My 1st submission to the WIP section
Hi Gang,
Well, this is my first 3D job that I’m getting ready to submit for final approval. First time ever modeling, and I am just learning C4D XL 7, and rendering w/GI in C4D XL 7.
I have spent entirely too much time on this project, but I guess there’s an inherent learning curve whenever you are learning new software. Needless to say, my brain is fried and I feel that I can’t really give an unbiased judgment if this is ok or not for a final approval.
I’m rendering the finals pics tonight, so the AA and the artifacts will be corrected with the new renders tonight. I am asking your input on:
1. Is there anything painfully obvious that I should address before I submit these to the client?
2. What mistakes should I watch out for that were made here but should be avoided in the future?
No GI on this pic only, and amazingly, my favorite of the bunch. I will probably end up submitting the similar GI'd pic below:
http://www.fusiondesigngroup.com/pics/KitchenLow.jpg
The rest have GI, but I feel everything looks woefully flat :(
http://www.fusiondesigngroup.com/pics/Kitchen02Low.jpg
http://www.fusiondesigngroup.com/pics/Fire02Low.jpg
http://www.fusiondesigngroup.com/pics/EntryLow.jpg
Be cruel and tear it up because I want to improve. I am rather disappointed in the way these turned out, so I really need some advice to get these looking more photo-real and professional. If no one can find something to crit here, I’ll be saddened because I know there’s a large margin for improvement here.
Thx for any and all insights,
Paul Griger.
P.S. the client has already been more than happy with the preliminary renderings, so they will be satisfied. I’m just shooting to push myself to the ranks of the rest of the pros here. :D
Hi Gang,
Well, this is my first 3D job that I’m getting ready to submit for final approval. First time ever modeling, and I am just learning C4D XL 7, and rendering w/GI in C4D XL 7.
I have spent entirely too much time on this project, but I guess there’s an inherent learning curve whenever you are learning new software. Needless to say, my brain is fried and I feel that I can’t really give an unbiased judgment if this is ok or not for a final approval.
I’m rendering the finals pics tonight, so the AA and the artifacts will be corrected with the new renders tonight. I am asking your input on:
1. Is there anything painfully obvious that I should address before I submit these to the client?
2. What mistakes should I watch out for that were made here but should be avoided in the future?
No GI on this pic only, and amazingly, my favorite of the bunch. I will probably end up submitting the similar GI'd pic below:
http://www.fusiondesigngroup.com/pics/KitchenLow.jpg
The rest have GI, but I feel everything looks woefully flat :(
http://www.fusiondesigngroup.com/pics/Kitchen02Low.jpg
http://www.fusiondesigngroup.com/pics/Fire02Low.jpg
http://www.fusiondesigngroup.com/pics/EntryLow.jpg
Be cruel and tear it up because I want to improve. I am rather disappointed in the way these turned out, so I really need some advice to get these looking more photo-real and professional. If no one can find something to crit here, I’ll be saddened because I know there’s a large margin for improvement here.
Thx for any and all insights,
Paul Griger.
P.S. the client has already been more than happy with the preliminary renderings, so they will be satisfied. I’m just shooting to push myself to the ranks of the rest of the pros here. :D