Michael Jordan WIP

[Wongedan]

hey thats cool mj man, !
I like the texture :)

its quite low poly, but cool. your texture works well with the geometry.

can I see from another view?

[scottchen23]

thank man ^^ u r VFS student too haha~~ i am also study there. i saw ur Boxer is awesome!!
I will update my another view later....becouse not in school now so can't render><

[DimaDavid]

looks like him... good start point.. keep wokring on it! (lips looks similar most)

[x2ego]

Good start. His face is a bit more elongated though. If you only have one reference picture, get a few more and you'll see.

[scottchen23]

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m69/scottchen23/3-1.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m69/scottchen23/7.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m69/scottchen23/1.jpg

[scottchen23]

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m69/scottchen23/4.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m69/scottchen23/6.jpg

[spirogyro]

I agree the head should be more elongated and I also beleive that his jawline should be so pronounced. But looks great nonetheless, you got the eyes down.

[scottchen23]

thanks for the comment i will try to make as him as possible. i still get to change my model alot
didnt look like him now >_<

[K_Digital]

I like this one. looks just like him.

[DarkTure]

Looking good. :thumbsup:
I think you should rework the ear tho.

[NyneDown]

haha...I've been throwing around the idea of modeling a Michael Jordan character also, yours is looking really nice. I agree about re-working the ear, touching up the jawline and elongating the face. He also looks a little bo-legged, adjusting the calves some and pushing the knees outward a little should really improve it quite a bit.

[scottchen23]

thanks for the advice ^^
i think i still need to wark on it more

this is my new render
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m69/scottchen23/8.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m69/scottchen23/11.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m69/scottchen23/10.jpg

[scottchen23]

new update
http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m69/scottchen23/skin_Pass_Render.jpg

[NyneDown]

Nice update man, the textures are looking really good. I'd probably kill the specularity just a little on the forehead area and also continue making the chin and lip textures as strong as the rest of the model. Keep it up dude...it's coming along ;)

[scottchen23]

thank you for your comment NyneDown it's very helpful:)
i will keep working on it!!

[cardboarddog]

Looking really nice.. quite often spec had a blue tint to it, perhaps try changing your spec to a very light blue colour..

[scottchen23]

spec is a very light blue colour?? i dont know that
OKOK i see now i will try it. thanks man

[scottchen23]

new update(10/14)

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m69/scottchen23/3d61_ScottChen_Term4_Final_pre20002.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m69/scottchen23/3d61_ScottChen_Term4_Final_pre20001.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m69/scottchen23/3d61_ScottChen_Term4_Final_pre20004.jpg

[Kickflipkid687]

It looks good, but is that his tounge sticking out in the second pic? It looks brown to me? Otherwise it looks quite like him, but i think it could still be tweaked maybe.

[scottchen23]

thank you for your comment Kickflipkid687
i will keep working on his geometry
and change the color of the tounge

[scottchen23]

NEW UPDATE!!


http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m69/scottchen23/head1.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m69/scottchen23/1-1.jpg

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