View Full Version : Environment : Industrialization
Freed 01-20-2003, 09:07 PM 1st image post here... a rather intimidating place to post amatuerish pieces... but here goes, there is always a 1st time :)
Done in 3dMax.
Curve adjustments in PS.
Grain added in PS.
http://www.theblokeinthepub.co.uk/auction/users/industrialupload.jpg
Crit away! :)
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fleedawg
01-20-2003, 09:38 PM
I think it looks good. The only thing that sticks out at me is the smokestacks on the right. The red looks a little TOO bright, and makes it stick out where everything else is kind of subdued and faded. Other than that, it looks nice.
:thumbsup:
jugger
01-20-2003, 10:00 PM
nice mood in the imge.. and that counts :)
now the critics. yes the smokestacks are way too saturated.
also the texture on the poles need some work. it looks really yellow and too big. there should be much more detail in the texture.. so the poles look like toy poles :)
the sky texture looks nice, however there is a lack of depth... some more cloud layers could improve the depth of the image...
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