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Onslaught_2000
07-23-2006, 09:24 PM
Hi i would like to get some input on a head model i'm working on.. I started 2 of them useing diffren refrence pic to see how the model will com out... I jsut started them so there not complete yet, but i would like to know what i need to fix on them..
ok here is the first head i model useing a refrence pic of a real human female http://home.earthlink.net/%7Egray_fox001/images/Face9.jpg

Now take a look at the one i made useing refrence pic of a drawing of a female head http://home.earthlink.net/%7Egray_fox001/images/ToonGirl09.jpg
PLease let me know what you think i need to keep working hard on, and what i should do to fix thoes areas that i cant seem to get right.. Any tips will help thanks.
digital-boy
07-24-2006, 04:47 PM
It may be easier if you post your reference picture then people can make a comparison of your model to the reference. Also rendering with wireframes will make it easier to identify problems with topology. Off the top of my head looking at the pics you posted the eyes look too far apart, the eyes, nose and mouth look dispropotionate and the models lack definition at this stage. Other than that, it's coming along not too badly. :thumbsup:
Onslaught_2000
07-24-2006, 05:28 PM
Ahh thanks for the advice i will try to get the wireframe, and the refrence pic i used... Also i will try the fix the problems with the eyes, nose, and mouth.
Onslaught_2000
07-24-2006, 05:43 PM
Ok here are the refrence pic i used for both models.
This pic is for the first face model i made http://home.earthlink.net/~gray_fox001/images/Simona_D_0114.jpg
now here is the second refrence pic i used for the toon girl face http://home.earthlink.net/~gray_fox001/images/tete_face.gif
I hope that helps.. I will try to have the wireframe of both faces a little later on today.
Onslaught_2000
07-24-2006, 06:09 PM
Ok here are the wireframes of both the toon face model and the real model

http://home.earthlink.net/~gray_fox001/images/ToonGirlwireframejpg.jpg
http://home.earthlink.net/~gray_fox001/images/Face10.jpg
digital-boy
07-24-2006, 06:50 PM
Ok, still kinda hard to tell from the wires, lose the eyeballs and render a shaded & wireframe model front view, scale the resulting render to the size of the reference heads and post the reference and rendered images consecutively, then a decent comparison can be made. Are you following the joan of arc tutorial for the "toon girl"? Are the heads closed? What 3d modelling package are you using?
Onslaught_2000
07-25-2006, 06:21 AM
No i'm not useing the joan of arc tut for the toongirl i am only useing the refrence pic. I will see what i can do to get the render you ask for.
Onslaught_2000
08-30-2006, 02:28 PM
Hi guys here is what i have of the female heads i started working on... i contuinted to model it and this what i have so far.. I can do with your input on what is not working, and what works... http://home.earthlink.net/%7Egray_fox001/images/FemaleBody01.jpg
kirigoi
08-30-2006, 03:08 PM
Ahem... You weren't modelling everything on that reference pic then? ;)
FabioMSilva
08-30-2006, 03:09 PM
hey, aside from the head, the rest seems fine. the clavicle seems very clean, and so do the breasts, tought they are a big large:)
Onslaught_2000
08-30-2006, 03:11 PM
No i was only useing it to keep some proprations of the body, but i want to create my own fantasy babe hehe
Onslaught_2000
09-08-2006, 03:32 PM
I'm back with anothr update to my model what do you guys think http://home.earthlink.net/%7Egray_fox001/images/Body.jpg
Onslaught_2000
09-08-2006, 11:43 PM
Just some light and a skin texture to see how it would look.
http://home.earthlink.net/%7Egray_fox001/images/BodyRender.jpg
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