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usmanghiyas
07-21-2006, 10:39 AM
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Title: Armour Of Gold
Name: Usman Ghias
Country: Pakistan
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop, ZBrush

Hello
how are u all
its been a long time since i have posted some thing new i have been working on this for 2 months aprox this is my first organic sclupture it took me alot of time and effort to complete ive faced lots of problems with modeling then rigging for rendring my inspiration was from GoldDemon by Aman Akram a very fine pakistani artist (www.warpedspace.com) im very thankful to my friend Iqbal for helping me out with zbrush tutorials face of this character is my selfpotrait (or i have tried to make it ) and its quite similar to me not very much .
lookin for comments and critics.
Thankful
Usman
Dionicio
07-22-2006, 07:02 AM
The gold shader looks more like hot glass, it also makes it difficult to focus on certain areas of the model. Modeling-wise, it looks like the head might be too big, and the pecs (chest muscles) are messed up, they shouldn't be so squished. The area between the top of the neck and the chest looks odd, it looks like you attempted to model the collar bone but it's not very apparent.

Sorry for only having critique. You put a nice effort into the piece, it just needs some fixin's and it'll be good :)
usmanghiyas
07-22-2006, 09:06 AM
thank u man for u constructive critics i think u are rite this is bcoz i have merged sss shader with gold to give it more organic look this is my first attempt with character soo i was lookin for critics as far as modeling i guess u can have a better look without any shdare im sharing
thank u once again
Usman
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