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[doylle]

I like the general mood. Heigh ceiling, "small" tables. But i think you're missing lamps. If it's dark outside, it's gonna be dark inside...:rolleyes: Texture on the left and right wall look ok (you do have a strange border on the left wall, texture doesn't seem to fit), but it looks like you have tilling at the back wall

other than that, very nice job :applause:

[KawizradSaddrax]

I Agree with the above, plus: The chairs seem to have no thickness, and the chair legs look plastic; making them look more like toys then real chairs. The floor looked tiled to me, and the hand railings also look to much like plastic. Really nice render for the most part! A few last things to think about…you can see through the doors on the left, but not the circular windows. Empty book shelves look too empty, and the foreground has nothing happening in it, maybe bring some tables closer to the camera? Keep at it!



/cweller

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