Jaguar R5

[koenf1]

Great effort !

But:

The airintake opening is way too small, the opening starts lower...compare with the HSBC figure on the sidepod.

The cockpitwalls are weird IMO...they should be flatter, going upwards slower.

The endplate of the frontwing isn't how it should be, the upperfront edge doesn't curve THAT smooth ;)

The mirrorsupports are too long, they're (were) thick and short in the real.

The nose (and especially the tip) is way too wide, now it's more like last year's McLaren Mercedes. And it curves more, like a U shape.

The bargeboards are not 100% straight, they curve towards the noseside ;)

There seems to be something wrong with the Engine cover -> The panther doesn't fit, i can't say whether it's 2D or 3D work yet. But what i do suppose is that due to the high cockpitwalls, also the neckrest is too high. Next to that it might be the airbox is too high, i'd like to see the hole smaller. Afraid it's a 3D issue though ;)

I guess the transition of the airintake area to the sidepod side, happens too sudden, your edge seems to be a little sharp :) That makes the HSBC logo to be cracked little.

Maybe this link can help you a lot http://www.imagesf1.com/2004/jaguar2004.html

Good luck ;)

Koenf1

[Enoki]

Koenf1 Thank you very much! Your advices and observations are very very helpful, and the link is a precious source of refences! With this I can go on. Soon I,ll post some pics of the progress. Thanks!

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