Greenfall - Landscape

[PsychedelicMind]

Wow! I must say that's pretty good, man!!! I really think your color choice was good! It is very realistic :) I think all you need to do is spend more time in doing details. Little things like creating the effect of lots of leaves and greenery around the waterfall helps to give the picture more, er... weight... :) Also think the sky could be livelier in terms of color...

The bits of red on the left was a nice touch :) Think I'll go stare at the pic somemore... hehe... well done!

[Menge]

great dude!!

i agree with PsychedelicMind. the thing is beautiful!

but it needs some detail... there are some loose lines which looking far away pass as twigs and branches... but it'd be great if they had more detail... like where they come from... and where do they end.

great dude! envy u! :P

[xLonewolfx]

looks great man

can i show your reference? :bounce:

[bM]

Originally posted by LõneWõlf™
looks great man

can i show your reference? :bounce:


Thanks.
What do you mean, do you want to show me a reference image, sure?.. or show me anything :)

take care.

[xLonewolfx]

damn keyboard =\


i = u

can u post it? :p

[bM]

sure i can post it.. here it comes.
although i have mostly used it to look at jungle colors and trees.

http://www.hit.se.org/dump/riverbank/rinverbank2.jpg

sorry for the size, 200kb, i didnt have time resaving it.

[xLonewolfx]

if that was your ref, u made a great job

:buttrock:

[chrisdejoya]

i thought your picture was acrylic at first glance!

[Vanje]

Very nice! :)

*wonders what those little red eyes belong to..." :eek:

[unLevel]

Amazing, simply stunning!:thumbsup:

Edit: I don't think an emoticon exists to adequately describe my admiration for this picture..

[gnarlycranium]

Whoa.. that is.. just... whoa. Seeing more detail in it will be great fun!

I just have one crit... the ledge of the waterfall on the right seems tilted... I don't think that would really happen in nature, it looks almost like the water is kinda defying gravity. Nitpicky.:)

[art7sayan]

Yeah , that's great!!!

I agree with Psyche for the details too but u got a really got landscape dude!!

And maybe some character (just one or two) could be cool too, just accordin' to your two lil' red eyes...this beast looks alone, give him company! :twisted:

:wavey:


-Arty-

[bM]

Hey thanks.

Im working on version 2 now. Its gonna be super :)
i can hardly wait to show ya, it got a totaly different mood, little later at night, alot more depth in it.. ALOT more details. im going over every single rock, leave, flower and drop of water. im also doing some fx lighting and shit .. i think you will enjoy it.
i will probably release it tomorrow. I would have released it tonight if i had chance to work on it to 07.00 but i have work.. urk.

until then, keep commenting :)
and if anyone of you have GFXartist account, i would lvoe your votes, im almost top10 :)
http://bm666.gfxartist.com/

see you around soonish.

[uNdo]

hey i was wondering what program you do these type of painting things and what do you need just the program or some sorta pen and tablet?

[art7sayan]

Hehe, you're on the frontpage now! Your background diserves it!

Congrats!


:wavey:

[uNdo]

dokie stupid me read the freaking post!!!

[wgreenlee1]

I agree about the lack of details but still a very excellent work!!!

[bM]

anyone want a sneak peak on the new more dramatic and detailed version?

[Najd]

Waaaaaaaaaw, that's the sort of paintings that make me say : waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw :buttrock:
great great great, and In a night of work.... great

[danRod]

Hey....GREAT job, especially for being your first painting in ps!!!

I especially like the little red eyes you added at the bottom of the waterfall. GREAT job:thumbsup: :buttrock:

[fleedawg]

Wow, excellent. Although it doesn't need improvement, if you have an updated version, I'd love to see it.
:applause:

[bM]

Originally posted by danRod
Hey....GREAT job, especially for being your first painting in ps!!!

I especially like the little red eyes you added at the bottom of the waterfall. GREAT job:thumbsup: :buttrock:


lol, no. isnt my first painting in photoshop :)
but it is my first LANDSCAPE painting. .

check out my gallery at either:
http://bm.deviantart.com/gallery (updated)

or my site:
http://www.nalf.it




...

version 2 is a totaly different image in many ways so i dont compare them at all, i like both. hope you guys also do it.

soonish.

[bM]

This is only a draft/preview/test
Final version may be totaly different.

as you see its a totaly different mood, so i dont compare the two images, either should you. :)


What do you think about this more dramatic mood.

http://www.hit.se.org/dump/riverbank/bm_030120_greenfall_v2_pre.jpg



Thanks

[Hexodam]

like the first one better, more fantasy feel over it, both fantastic though ;)

here are two pictures I took over a year ago of a waterfall here in Iceland, sortof looks like yours ;) maybe you can use it somehow


http://notendur.centrum.is/~czar/misc/island/P8250036.JPG
http://notendur.centrum.is/~czar/misc/island/P8250001.JPG

[tdmack]

oooohhhhhhh, Very very nice, nice use of colour creates a real nice mood.

[NileshXYZ]

more small water drops at the bottom, lots of small dots.

[coupon]

very nice, please don't add a diving girl

[Jimzip]

Brilliant, I love it! It does need a little more colour in the foliage on the sides I think, that's my only suggestion. More flowers or something, and maybe one of those long tailed birds flying in the sky above the waterfall!
No diving girl! I think the mood is great at present!
Still it's a beautiful piece, you should be proud!:thumbsup:

[Lukashi]

It looked so peacefull in the first one, now it looks violent and power, im not sure which i like better, they are both great though :airguitar

[KirkBjerk]

Both look outstanding. I really enjoy the latest one though, I love the boldness in the lines and the contrast with the water and the green foliage. Although it somewhat ciontradicts the boldness approach maybe add more water dissipation in the air give more a of a ~heavy~ mist, not to light. This will help bring more of a jungle look perhaps? Both look amazing. Maybe now try for a panoramic view of a jungle valley!

[platypus]

i think just a single silhoutted figure (small) on top of the rock would be great. maybe more differentiation between sky and water too?

other than that... WOW! excellent work.

:drool:

[xyth]

Hiya,

Both pic is nice to me, but I really miss the (bigger) vapour, fog, clouds (call it whatever... :) ). Waterfalls does not have this sharp form.

I know it's a draft, and this was only a suggestion... ;)

-xyth

[gL_spear]

Great image, the brush strokes really make it seem as if the water is falling. would make a great poster :drool:

[bM]

thanks!

Here is last draft, im working on both versions =)
I'll keep you posted as soon i released another draft/final.



Original (more green warm feeling):
http://www.gfxartist.com/community/member_gallery/12857

Dramatic version (cold, creepie feeling):
http://www.hit.se.org/dump/riverbank/bm_030120_greenfall_v2_pre.jpg


See ya :)

[bM]

FINAL VERSION.
Changed name to - Untouched - Landscape

http://www.hit.se.org/dump/gfxartist/portfolio/full/bm_untouched_final.jpg



Thanks for all support, cc and comments.
It's really appreciated.

Take care
-bM

[Abe]

This is fantastic ,wonderful peice of eye magic do you think you could get the same results with the smaller tablet as i am thinking of getting one but it would be a A5 .Would you be able to get the same detail

[Alevice]

It is really Amazing, but the falling water at some points looks more like spiderwer (not Spiderman web), yet i still think it fits very well with the rest.

[g3n]

very nice work

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