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beefcake
01-19-2003, 02:27 AM
just a little something.. the most of the work in this forum is just amazing.. so i don't feel that my work does fit here.. but some feedback can help me to get better..

here you go:

http://beefcake.xp.no/3d/small_house_test.jpg

giz
01-19-2003, 03:24 AM
White frame is very well done :wip:

Common man, post some bigger image without this frame.

Magius
01-19-2003, 08:05 AM
i like the model! and i like to way you put the picture! good work! :thumbsup:

beefcake
01-19-2003, 12:42 PM
her's a bigger image:

http://beefcake.xp.no/3d/small_house_test_2.jpg

is this bad ass, since so few give me any reply? should i post this another place?

jger
01-19-2003, 05:15 PM
No, itīs absolutely not badass. Itīs very cool and I like your colouring. THose warm brown colours are great. I like! =)
What irritates me a bit is the DoF. It makes the house appear to be very small, more a toy house and it doesnīt fit the perspective that well. Other than that, great! And your white frame on the first pic is a very nice idea! =)

J.

giz
01-19-2003, 10:45 PM
I like your work but DOF is very strange. You have no DOF on first image (with white frame which is nice for web page but not here where you want to show some details). Nice colours. Try also with blue light for outside and leave yellow inside.

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