nadina the turtle

[nadie00]

Hi. I expect your C&C. Thankshttp://www.asturismo.com/bocetos%20tortuga%20acoplado%20copia_paraelforo.jpg

[paperclip]

Hi! Welcome to the forums!

I think you'll get more replies if you put the character into an environment- right now it's looking rather spare.

As for the turtle- I think it's going well! I like the shell, you have a good blend of hard and soft edges there. The head however needs a bit more contrast and some more colors. Try highlighting with a bit of light yellow on an overlay layer, then putting shadows in with a darkish purple also on an overlay layer and see what you think.

Oh and don't forget to put some sparkle in that eye!

Keep going! Can't wait to see this finished.

[aldog]

looks very cute, but very creepy.
my critique would be the positioning of the rocket. I'd think that it'd be more likely to have 2 rockets spaced evenly on either the bottom or the top
good work.

[nadie00]

Hi. I expect your C&C. Thanks
Scene 3
http://www.asturismo.com/3%20paraforo.jpg

[nadie00]

Some changeshttp://www.asturismo.com/tortugaparaforo4.jpg

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