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07-17-2006, 10:17 AM
So here are some pieces that I want to submit to the next Exotique. Just like some feedback as to what you guys think. If one of them just says image, right click it an click view image.:)
I think this ones chin needs something, don't know what though.
07-17-2006, 10:41 AM
FOR THE FIRST PICTURE:
I'm no expert but I think, while the body rocks, the head is lacking. Perhaps brighter more rememberal eyes? Smoother shading on the head too would be good. And maybe some more green glow on the hair as there is still the green light source directly to the left of the hair there?
Also the thumb on the right hand (her left) is much too far away from the fingers.
Something about those knees too.. And perhaps a little more depth to the background on the otherside?
Keep at it though :) I really like the reflecting shininess of the gold
07-17-2006, 09:15 PM
I love... no... LOVE the hands in the first one. I'm really picky about womens hand's Face and hair needs work though. Must be the cheeks and the nose. Also her eyes seem to be getting lost in the make-up. Composition-wise the right side of the composition could use some texture to kill the almost dead-space.
Same with the second one nose feels weird (maybe the size and shape). Eyes closed works fine. Also the Icicles could be a but more sculpted so they dont take away from the compostion. The most immediate thing that comes to mind is the crystals in Superman Returns. They would work here coz they are geometric.
The boobs in the second composition could sag a little because of the pull of gravity. And her left arm could feel a bit more fleshy (defined). Finally... Her fingers here could be wrapped around the arm. Presently they just jut out of a black patch. They feel awkwardly placed.
Loving the poses though. the back in 2 is expressive.
07-17-2006, 11:09 PM
Thanks for the feedback guys, might go with another one instead of the purple hair lady, depends on how much time I have.
07-17-2006, 11:09 PM
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