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shy-guy

07-16-2006, 07:44 AM

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Title: LUZ Computer Lab
Name: Daniel Castillo
Country: Venezuela
Software: 3ds max

This is an assigment for my 3d modeling class in the university. I had to model, texture and light the computer laboratory of the faculty. I had to do it really quick because of the deadline and the amount of work i had in that moment;there are some details i would have like to fix but here it is.

Crits are welcome.

ACTC

07-16-2006, 10:00 AM

cool work, but I think the ceiling is abit too low incomparing with all the other elements in the surrounding.

xoranimation

07-16-2006, 10:32 AM

good work, maybe a bit to much dof.
looks like a scene for monsters - inc :-)

andy

Darkseal

07-16-2006, 02:01 PM

Very nice! A little less DOF would really make the place look bigger imo:thumbsup:

eavillar

07-16-2006, 02:58 PM

Excelente imagen y buena proporcion de colores, mi unica critica seria la que el techo esta muy bajo comparado con las sillas y el DOF en la segunda imagen es muy exagerado. Como dijo alguien, parece un background de Monster Inc. Buen trabajo.

Excellent renders and good colors use and proportions, my crit could be the ceiling is too low and DOF is flooding the second render. Like some1 wrote, look like a Monster Inc background. Good work.

shy-guy

07-16-2006, 05:44 PM

hey, thanks a lot guys :) I didn´t notice about the ceiling actually, altghough there where a few other things that i wanted to fix.

I think you´re all right about the DOF, i kinda overused it.

And btw, its amusing to know you find a resemblance with a Monster Inc background, i never thought of that.

Sigan criticando y gracias. Keep the critics rolling and thanks.

LuisNrike

07-16-2006, 05:57 PM

Hey there Bro! nice work as usual... i kinda like the DOF like it is you really weren't going for 100% real life look to it... and besides the way it is... it has its own personality and style.... :thumbsup:

And bout that Monster, INC. comment... could that be a compliment in disguise... *cue in metal guitars and flying horsemen of the apocalypse* :buttrock: :buttrock:

Luis Nrike

xoranimation

07-16-2006, 06:02 PM

that was definitely a compliment ! :-)

andy

AndrewATL

07-16-2006, 06:47 PM

What is this, a center for ants!? I has to be at least.....3 times this size.

Feeank

08-28-2006, 04:59 AM

I like it, there are some details here and there but overall it's really pleasing to the eye. Keep it up Daniel:thumbsup:

shy-guy

08-30-2006, 06:14 AM

Thanks a lot man!! :thumbsup:

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