"Alone" (interior view)

[coffeecactus]

Well, my first reaction is that the wall and floor textures looks too low res. Maybe you could overlay the file textures with a subtle high detail procedural?
The glow and grain thingy you got going on gives a nice feeling of a dusty room. If that's what you're going for, how about some volumetric light?
Also, I kinda react to the sharpness of the corner in the middle of the image, I think it kinda kills the feeling of realistic light. Maybe you should try softening the corners using ambient occlusion or a dirt shader?

Keep it up :)

/Jimboo

[Chuppa]

Nice, I like the lighting setup. There's a lot of contrast, which adds to the atmosphere.

The texture looks a little low-rez, probably because of the long shadows as well. It might be the bump map too, dunno.

I also think the scene looks a little too bumpy and diverse now, maybe toning down the bump map would add some uniformity.

[Schoenrock]

im thinking that the scale of the texture resolution is off. something i learned from retro studios is that everything has to be in scale, even textures. i like your lighting, its very nice. i think that once you fix the texture issue it will, look real good.

[SpaffHawk]

Thanks, I agree with all of you on the textures, there actually recycled from an old project on the same theme but as the camera's so much closer in this i think it's time for a new set of textures.


thanks

[SpaffHawk]

Finally got around to doing something with this. Any thoughts?

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