Races of Middle Earth - Character - Wiz

[marioucci]

WOW WIZ!!!!!

the subtleties of the abs and chest are amazing.. id do the same with the shoulders since they look a lil over sized.
its terrific anathomy mate.
keep it up

loggie

[Fetus23]

Hey wiz!!...Nice to see you over here in a challenge!! Your character is looking great ....keep going!! You've Improved SOOOO much since i first saw your works...good job man!!:thumbsup:
:wavey:
fetus

[Wiz]

Wow thanks guys :)
2 ppl i really apprecite ..thanks alot
i am having some proprtions issues ,but i am working on it :)

[Wiz]

i wanst a ware that i have to post wip's ..
i just read it in another topic! so ill put some of my progress pictures!

http://www.goldmanland.com/pic/Wip.JPG

http://sv2.3dbuzz.com/vbforum/attachment.php?s=&postid=177043

http://www.goldmanland.com/pic/Render.jpg

http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/11134815.jpg


And heres slight Update!




http://www.threedy.com/attachment.php?s=&postid=32033

[ilasolomon]

:) Hey! You always amaze me, very good design/model...
i see now you are mastering WING3D, what's your next app?! :D :) ;)
With best wishes
Ila

[Wiz]

here is an update!
now proptions even more messed up! :bounce:

http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/11203195.jpg

[Wiz]

here is some progres..
the render is a bit old
and the legs i just began :)

http://www.goldmanland.com/pic/Orc.JPG

http://grm.m.walla.co.il/briefcase/0004/u/r/i/l/o/t/a/n/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/r/200301250220089564/200301252055413638/model.JPG

[Araval]

Excellent model...
I like this face... looks very "demonic" :thumbsup:
generally whole model looks great
Good start!
Greetz

[Wiz]

thanks alot man!!

[Wiz]

Some wierd texture pic :)
i just wanted not grey..hehe its not gonna be final texture or anything..
hmm the arms will be remodeled as they are very bad..

[Wiz]

http://grm.m.walla.co.il/briefcase/0004/u/r/i/l/o/t/a/n/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/@/r/200301250220089564/200301262303091589/Orc.JPG

[ilasolomon]

Damn, Uri, come on boy, it's coming along very nicely, I can't believe that you are only 16 & start 3D just half a year ago!
your future shines....my friend.
I can't crit & your model, just suggest pay more attention to the feet, they look a bit cartoonish (legs are good).
Regards
Ila

[Wiz]

Thanks alot ! :eek: :eek:

best comment i have ever got :)

and you are right on feet.. tommrow When i get back from school ill fix them :)

Thanks alot ila! i am dieing to see rest of your model!

[Virtuoso]

It's coming along nicely. I agree with Ila on the feet. If a toon or in between the toon and real Worlds, a caricature for example the feet would be fine,but with this creation I think look into the minor changes needed. Fine work Wiz.:thumbsup: :beer:

[Wiz]

Thanks guys :)
here is a wire untill i begin to fix things!

http://img.tapuz.co.il/forums/11510639.jpg

[Wiz]

here is an update!

http://www.threedy.com/attachment.php?s=&postid=35489

[Clanger]

Wow, coming along nicely.
Love the huge hands, the traps look a little strange being so high though.

[Wiz]

why would u mind telling me whats a trap ? :)
and thanks!

[Clanger]

It's that large muscle that starts in the centre of the back and ends half way up your neck. Trapezius in full. Looking at it more maybe it's not too high, he does have a very long neck but I think its not attaching far enough to the front, tricky one.

[Wiz]

Ah yes
the neck needs some work :) Thanks!

[Wiz]

here some wear..
i am going for Primtive look
so hell just have this and a spear
maybe some banana :)
when some accesroies then ill try to rig him (Yuck)
hes so heavy and not in divnchi pose :(

[KingMob]

Hey looks great man, but I got two things that bug me now

(ididnt read every post, I am a lazy american)

A. the chest should be a little more defined, like where the muscles of the pecs are, its to smooth now compared to the rest of the model(which is really cool so far)

the toe nails bulge a little strange right now, sorta cartoony, maybe make them flatter or pointier, he looks mean, so those soft round toenails seem out of place!

keep up the good work!

[Wiz]

your right about the finger nails..
i did them ijust scaled the large toe ,and gave a wierd affect , i
am gonna re-do 'em.. about the chest ill work it..gotta look at some refernce for that tho :)

[CGSisdead]

great Model Wiz:buttrock:

but here's something:
the tendons on the neck that lead to the clavicle ought to be a little more straight ( in my opinion)
could look a little bit better like this:

[Wiz]

You are very correct... was wondering whats wrong with the neck!ill fix it!

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