character: girl

[Temporal]

Hello!

The texturing is very well done, and I like pose, sort of reminds me of the Matrix.
There is something a bit off about her proportions though. Perhaps the head/face is too big, and the hands look a bit overly large as well.
She could use a bit more hair as well, especially on the left side, but otherwise it's a great model :D

[Raul-Reznek]

Sexy baby!! :D

GREAT buddy, it's great :D

i think the eyes are too far apart one from the other, and u LOVE the breasts, nice, really well proportioned :D

How bout a matte?

[Werner]

Thanks for the cool replies guys!

Raul-Reznek, I think you are right about the eyes...I'll fix that...the perspective doesn't help much tho. :thumbsup:

about the proportions...I'm not going for a realistic female character her...more of a comic kinda 3d style. I scaled the hands up on perpose. ;) The head is proportionaly correct tho...like I said, the bad perspective, and maybe also, the bad lighting, makes her head look big.

thanks again...I'll update soon. :buttrock:

[Werner]

image without the 2d coat.

[oxygen_77]

Hey, I really like your style! Very nice image... Keep up the good work!

[luigi]

it,s rocks

like the texture and lighting to

But the beste for me is the head is diferent to the tipical female head and instead of this is a pretty girl

very good job



:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :buttrock: :buttrock:

[mv]

Nice job Werner :beer: like her head and the textures. But I think the head is too big. Waiting for updates!

[Werner]

don't get as much free time anymore...here an update...still not done tho

What do ya think?

[road to hell]

very very nice :beer: .

[Temporal]

Dang :applause:

That looks so much better than before. The face, the torso, they both look excellent :D

The only thing I'd like to point out though is the arms. They still look to thin, and the armpit looks like it should come down farther, but otherwise that is some great work there!

[Remi]

Nice style you got there....the face is so soft looking....great job:thumbsup:

[aurora]

I love it, especially the second image. She looks almost exactly like a girl I dated way back in high school, save the breasts. The only comment I have is that the upper arms seem kinda small compared to her forearms. It could simple be the angle we see from the first image. The other thing directly under her shoulders she should have a more concave surface there instead of the current convex surface along the upper torso. Does that make sense???

[That Adrian Guy]

You rule!!!!!!

I rarely comment unless the style is really unique... I love this model! It's cartoony yet realstic and you did an excellent job texturing.

The face is cute the breasts are very natural but the hands seem *just a bit* too large for her.

Keep up the work! :thumbsup:

(checking to see if you have a website)

[conjaman]

Nice Job. Your texture work is good. I like her pants... Among other things :drool:

Keep up the good work :thumbsup:

www.ronincircle.com (http://ronincircle.com/vagabond3d.html)

[IDownupI]

i think :love:

[ASCIISkull]

I love the face on her... very intense expression.

How'd you handle the wrinkles in the clothing? How does that look animated? I think that's my favorite part of it technically.

[Lunatique]

I really like your stylized look. So refreshing from all the photoreal stuff people try so hard to do, or the completely cartoony stuff we see too much of.

[Werner]

wow, thanks guys!

Temporal: thanks for the crit! I'll have a look at her arms...I'm not realy going for correct preportions on this model...she is somewhere between toon and real. I will work on the arms tho!

Remi: thanks bud!

aurora : It does make sense. :) I still need to add morphs to the arm pits, to bring the muscle from the breast down, where it should be. This is straight bone deformations. I'll fix, and repost.

That Adrian Guy: thanks for the reply then! I'm glad you like her.
The hands are supposed to be slightly bigger than usual...made them little bit smaller already tho....they still need some work (no fingernails)

ASCIISkull : thanks! the wrinkles on her pants is a normal bump map. It looks preaty cool when moving...but like I said, there are no morphs to fix problem areas, at this stage...will get there soon.

Lunatique : thank you man. it means a lot comming from a master like you! love your work!


I'm still fooling around with Saslight (hair generator in Lightwave) so this could be better, I think...will work on it more.


thanks again people...your comments helps alot!

:thumbsup:

[Lunatique]

Werner- Bwahahhhaaa!! I'm no master. Not even close. But thanks. :D

[Werner]

Originally posted by Lunatique
Werner- Bwahahhhaaa!! I'm no master. Not even close. But thanks. :D


:thumbsup:

[zurfer]

I´, not shure but I think i like the first image better. perhaps its just the lighting and that the pose feels more dynamic but i think the face looked better on the first too the square face and the hairdo just cought my eye better.
The hands sjould be left tha way theey are i think both the size of the head and hands is what makes her so special. The eyes look better in the second one though.
I´m not shure about the stiff nipples, they seem abit overkill to me.
All in all a great model and I´m looking forward to seeing some updates.

Peter

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