[environment]:Time's Vestige

[xinraylife]

http://www.chinadv.com/bbs/photo/2003192149252591.jpg

night style.

[Daveaustin]

i'm not entirely sure what that wheel is supposed to do, but..

WOW it looks fantastic! very nicely textured, especially the corrosion on the metal

can we see a wireframe?

[Blackarts]

hey,

The first thing that hits me about this image is the textures. They look pretty good! The wheel looks very worn and used, and very believable. The texture on the tree is pretty good too, although it seems a bit too shiny for my taste. Also, I think you could spend a bit more time making the bark of the tree more lifelike...right now it looka a little too much like plaster or concrete.

You may want to push the color of the background down a bit, and give it a bit more depth. I think the image as a whole is just feeling a little flat right now.

I agree with Daveaustin....I can't really figure out what this image is supposed to be. It's a wheel in a tree, but i feel i can't see enough of the picture to figure out whats going on.

hope this helps!

[xinraylife]

Thank you two for my work.

the work's composition of a picture exist deficiency,really
i will correct it a few days later.

i really can't explain this image is supposed to be.
I just do it according to my mind.
maybe I represent a kind of sharp- cut contrast : ladybird beetle is life and brevity,but wheel is molder and long.
this is the reason why my work's title is Time's vestige.

now,it's wireframe.http://www.chinadv.com/bbs/photo/20031192013212591.jpg

[PhilOsirus]

:thumbsup: I like it, and the little beattle too:)

[Araval]

wow!!
It`s real... like a photo :thumbsup:
Incredible lighting and textures

RESPECT!

[Carnifex]

Actually to me that looks like a valvehandle sticking out of an old concrete wall. Not a wheel on a tree. Looks very nice. Good lighting and excellent textures in my opinion.

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