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Calimax
07-10-2006, 08:55 PM
It was a sketch that had been fluttering arounf my hard drive. Now i'm trying to make somthing of it. Any suggestions/crits?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/calimax/bnoeufhgeusketchredo.jpg

Wiggin
07-10-2006, 09:34 PM
Is it Elvira? Anyways, her breasts are a bit too high as well as her collar bone and shoulders. With her collar bone you may want to slant them more, and have them stick out. (More shading on the underside of collar I think.) I like to look in the mirror or at a picture when I'm painting a person. It really helps me to see an example, instead of trying to paint from my head, maybe it could help you too. Looking like it's off to a good start. I'll be looking forward to some updates.

Hope I could help.

Calimax
07-10-2006, 09:46 PM
Is it Elvira? Anyways, her breasts are a bit too high as well as her collar bone and shoulders. With her collar bone you may want to slant them more, and have them stick out. (More shading on the underside of collar I think.) I like to look in the mirror or at a picture when I'm painting a person. It really helps me to see an example, instead of trying to paint from my head, maybe it could help you too. Looking like it's off to a good start. I'll be looking forward to some updates.

Hope I could help.

I totally agree, now having it been pointed out i've noticed it. :)

EDIT; and no it's not elvira. :P

Calimax
07-11-2006, 09:09 AM
This is about 20mins more work, just a small update.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/calimax/bnoeufhgeusketchredo2.jpg

Calimax
07-11-2006, 01:09 PM
An updated version; (*is still in need of help*)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v637/calimax/bnoeufhgeusketchredo3small.jpg

Calimax
07-11-2006, 04:40 PM
For finished picture go here; http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/36141433/

Wiggin
07-11-2006, 05:09 PM
Not bad at all. I like the red glow, and the owl is sooo cute, LOL. I knew it wasn't Elvira, just what came to mind at first glance. Good work.

Calimax
07-12-2006, 05:25 PM
Thank you.

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