Character: Alien

[Najd]

Hey, I really like it. Good ambiance and colors.

There's one thing that bothers me, the arm on the left seems deformed, or attached to low. I don't know.

How did you do that fog effect ??

[Volker]

You might want to think about changing the design of your image. The way he is posed, things are overlapping too much, and you can't see any depth. Move the arm with the gun and little, and I can't quite tell what the other hand is doing. Looking good...
~Zach

[FatAssasin]

Looks good. I love the smoke. And the lighting works really good. But I agree with Babyhopper, the pose needs some work.

[ahattemer]

i agree about the overlapping parts also, everything but the arms are sweet in the pose though, maybe even just a different camera angle?

by the way, this alien looks like he has an enormous johnson! but hey aint nothin wrong with that!

[piajartist]

Looks like a pissed green ant, hilarious!!!

[mikey11]

Thanks for the feedback everyone:-)

Yeah i agree with the posing problems, im not an expert at that. I guess I have to think more in terms of an understandable silhouette?

I want to work on the shaders a bit more, some of them are too plastic-like, and I want to change the camera angle, get a bit more of a comic-book like perspective going on.

Lol funny comment about the crotch area, and yes he does have a big "area" there, as a result of some deformation problems withe the physique. will try to post a further image with the modifications:-)

Thanks again!

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