Character:princessy type girl

[jojoba007]

I think his skin needs more detail.

Also his lips needs more detail.
Look at your own lips in the mirror. The have a structure that
i dont see back in your image!!

Maybe you can make some better lightning so the
image gets a more realistic look to it!!

It is a good start but needs more work!!

post an update!!

;)

[commy]

erm u did read the topic post right? princessy type girl, cus uve replied with lots of "his" when its a "her"

nobody else has had this problem anyways its a woman hence the soft smooth skin

will post updates soon

[Obraxis]

Getting there. I think she could do eye-lashes, as women tend to have longer ones than men, it will instantly make her look better.

I wont comment on skin, as u oviously dont need help there ;)

Rock on :buttrock:

[commy]

yah id actualy done a version with lashes but it was such a small update i didnt post it anyways since its come up heres the pic,

currently working on her body which is gonna take a day or 2 i guess

http://mattdickinson.digi-port.net/files/tienface.14.jpg

[Obraxis]

Those eye-lashes are way too small and thin. Princesses often have big, long and thick lashes to exentuate their features.

[commy]

sorted the lashes out as i thought the problem was direction not length

http://mattdickinson.digi-port.net/files/tienface.16.jpg

quick shot of the body in progress the skins shapign up nice but the dress is still in a very early stage

http://mattdickinson.digi-port.net/files/tienface.17.jpg

[Obraxis]

The lashes are much better - but they arew still quite short. If you look at princesses like the one from Shrek, Snow White or Cinderella, they all have long eye-lashes to help exentuate the facial features and their beauty.

I would advise longer lashes.

The clothes seems to be going well, though her dress is very revealing. Princesses are supposed to be virgins, so are not supposed to reveal their body until they are married. Unless your putting a think cloth around her to cover up her tummy. At the moment she is looking lie she's about to go out for a night out!

Another thign I notie is that her skin is still mainly orangey. If she is alive then she would have variable colouring on the face. If she is dead, she would mainly be a pale pinky yellow.

Hope this crit helps ;)

[commy]

im not gonna bother trying to answer those questions cus 1/2 of them are self explanatory and the other 1/2 arent relevenant

now for a small update: new eye balls better iris textures eye white, iris and pupil ratio has been changed to more human proportions. much better me thinks, working on the arms/dress at the moment hope to have update sin a few days

http://mattdickinson.digi-port.net/files/tienface.21.jpg

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