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[RobW720]

squishy text does not a good film make.

whats the point of this?

[dprgb]

And maybe next time:

1. a better (descriptive) thread title

2. put the thread in the correct forum

[JeroenDStout]

*crude inspiration*

I can name only but 3 narcotic drugs that would improve this.

*nice inspiration*

Put it in the right subforum, and work a lot on.. everything. It's just quite simple animated text right now.

[HellBoy]

beside everything said, I'd say this is targeted for younger viewers but now its quite tedious

[WMBrown]

dunno, i think it would work as an intro for a film, but as a film itself it is lacking...

pick a camera angle and start working on a story to add to it.

as it is, however, it's not that bad... it could use some more work but as a plain test and or intro, it's not that bad. imagine if there was a cartoony elephant character (why does the character from "Pokoyo" come to mind... dunno) strutting up behind it and leaning on it, i think that could give it a little more depth.

[MikeRhone]

It looks like something straight out of word world:

http://www.wordworld.com/

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