red tractor in field , waleed abdeen, waleed abdeen (3D)

[irananimator]

Wo0ow
Very nice rendering and modeling
I like your Lighting.
great job.


Hamed Katebi

[su]

Nice modeling :thumbsup: I think the textures can use some dirt on them. composition is also good. keep it up:)

[MAB991]

Salaam :)
your modeling and lighting is perfect good work man i like it :thumbsup:

[tuba3d]

Hey Gandoza, good work!:thumbsup:


I will make two critics:

- the tire and black parts seems to be too white to me
- the lightining it is a little strange (for example: the back storage (the dark grey one) seems to be totally o shadow, and appears to be out of the scene)

My general critic is regarding the lightning and picture contrast, something it is not fitting well.


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Tuba3d

[ap3pilot]

Hey Dude You Work Here Is Terrific:thumbsup:

Might wanna turn down the illumination slightly, bit bright for me.

Otherwise Bravo

[deepsdesign]

hi grate modeling,texturing & lighting.
:thumbsup: keep going.
best luck


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[kwills2567]

Great model and scene, I like the roughness on the tires and metal. My only crit is that they don't look 'red' enough. They could be faded, but if so, its too evenly faded. Should be a darker red, looks almost pink.

[rimshot]

very nice..dirt map?

[thE-AzRaiL]

nice work (:

[gandoza]

thanks for comments
i forgot these pics of sceine
hope you like it
http://www.j1jj.com/uploads/24865b38fc.jpg

http://www.j1jj.com/uploads/6a0743dbc9.jpg

http://www.j1jj.com/uploads/4e8ff13eef.jpg

http://www.j1jj.com/uploads/f28be8b3df.jpg

[bitBrain]

I don't know why, but I like this :) And about the brightness I can't crit anything as it may well be that sunlight is this intense in Qatar ;)

[dapride]

I like the work on this scene. Just wondering why the rear tires are modeled with the tread
reversed. My tractors and every one I've seen has chevron pattern facing forward.

[CME64]

nice work man
i like it
but what is the material kind ? is it blin?
see ya

[dapride]

I do like like your tractor, I would'nt write back if I did'nt. Being a mechanical engineer I have to point out that if the steering linkages are in the present position .....the front wheels should be turned to the right. Woops. Still a real nice image. Maybe a little dirt would make it more photo-real.

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