Char Exhibition--01

[hanzo]

:airguitar :annoyed:

Hey what the hell is this I need comments!
How come nobodies commenting?

[PsychedelicMind]

:) Replies don't alwayz come in an instant. Patience... the comments will come in time :)

I think your work's pretty good, Hanzo! Love all those robots! Especially hamerhead & the desert robot. I see that you are very influenced by manga/anime. But it's always good to try to develop your own style in drawing. Create a style that would bring life to the lines of your characters.

Also, you could continue to practice your shading. Like the Jess picture. The coat doesn't look very convincingly to me cos the shading doesn't follow the contours & curves of the coat. But Practice makes perfect, man! :) Continue drawing and observing stuff around you! That'll help!

Have you ever tried inking or coloring your work? I think they deserve it (especially the robots) :D

Well, wish you luck in making your website! Go here (http://www.homestarrunner.com/sbemail51.html) for some 'advice' on how to make websites! ;)

Cheers!
Psyk

[hanzo]

I really like that crit. Thankzz PsychedelicMind Thats the kind
of stuff I want to here, Jess is practice (actualy I feel that I
destroyed her), well thats practice. This Manga style is for me
I've been drawing it for the last 5 years, but your write I should
add my own 2 cent, and learn how to ink... hey, you got a great Site and I love that mangish still.. too cool!

thanks

[wildsheepchase]

Don't be surprised if all of your pics except one are removed. You're not allowed to post galleries here.
You've got some cool characters. My only suggestion would be to vary the line weights a bit. I think that would make your comic style drawings really stand out.

[hanzo]

I'd do that but the scanner can';t see it right,

thanks though.

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