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jtiger01
06-30-2006, 02:06 AM
This is a wip animation for my demo reel. My goal was to show emotions with a Juice box. As always, your critiques are necessary and very much appreciated.




UPDATED! 07/27


http://jtiger3d.com/videos/juicebox.mov

lutonomy
06-30-2006, 07:50 AM
Whats up holmes, this is looking really good! Nice little story here and some appealing characters. A few comments:

-The juice box looks a little too taffy-like. In my opinion the stretch is a bit too much and the top is dragging too much when he jumps. Although I might give him an extra frame of hangtime rather than bringing in the top because with all that stretch the jumps are looking a bit strobe-like.

-The creepy guy looks good though maybe the arms/hands feel a tad too random. Also when he's moving his fingers I would offset them as well - right now they're pretty much all closing/opening together.

-After he gets stomped on maybe some more overlap in the arm sticking out.

Great job, you certainly have been busy! I'll watch for updates.

jtiger01
06-30-2006, 11:38 AM
here is an update, I Added feet overlap to the small juice box and made the fall of Mama Juice Box quicker to get more weight in.

http://jtiger3d.com/videos/JUICE_BOX_final_v4.mov

jtiger01
07-05-2006, 11:07 PM
hey guys, i'm getting ready to wrap this one up. Any last minute critiques?

http://jtiger3d.com/videos/JUICE_BOX_final_v4.mov

Junerahe
07-06-2006, 05:04 AM
In general it looks great but like lutonomy said it feels less like a juicebox and more like a gob of jello or something with such an elasticity.

jtiger01
07-27-2006, 08:23 PM
www.jtiger3d.com/videos/juicebox.mov (http://www.jtiger3d.com/videos/juicebox.mov)

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