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MetallManson
06-29-2006, 03:09 PM
Hi,.

I post this drawing about 1 month ago : http://www.kamermans.net/Designs/Fishing.jpg


I got allot of critics about the hair. So I decided to go to work again and got painting.

Here is a small update. I hope I improved a bit.


http://www.kamermans.net/Designs/cg10.jpg



Please give me some comments an Critics.


greetz,

MM

Imirie
06-29-2006, 05:46 PM
I remember the first version; I thought it was really neat.
The hair is looking a lot better in the new one, and the new fishies are so cute. xD

The little clump of hair that's aiming up, on the right side (the one with the 3 parallel strands), looks like it should be softened a bit, though.

I like the darker background, too, it makes her stand out more. :)!

Samsonite0077
06-29-2006, 05:49 PM
Looking good. the hair needs more work. the orange strands in her hair dont make much sense.

i like the idea though gl on it.

MetallManson
07-05-2006, 08:24 PM
here is a smallupdate =)

http://www.kamermans.net/Designs/cg12.jpg

davezak
07-05-2006, 08:32 PM
excellent concept.. the water is perfect at the top.. but your concerned about the hair...

the only thing i would see is the bottom right hair doesn't quite convince me its flowing freely in water... every group of hair is similar thickness..?

the look in her eyes is wonderful.

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