Character: Urban Amazon

[tim THP]

:beer: excellent!! really like the clothes!! only crit would be that if you're going for the real amazon look then the big boot (trust me, i'm a fan of big boots) make her look a little short - when i think of amazons i imagine hulking women with long legs. just my 2c. really nice otherwise.

[Projectkmo]

Id have to agree... Very awesome... but for the boots giving the short look....that and she might actualy be a tad short ....
though all the models you see here have the insane long legs.... for an amazon, I think it's a necessity...maybe some stilleto thigh highs... = )........but maybe a fat rubber stilleto heel/combat look

[T0BER]

Really nice face you've given her.

I think she looks around 5'9 as well but the wider face and stockier build gives her a pretty tough appearance and thus character - no need for her to be a stereo-typical cyber vixen.

She should look great when textured. :)

[baddog]

I think its excellent. the figure has proportions that make sense which is a refreshing change. Only her hands seem perhaps a little small, and the headband a little 'stiff'?

Shaun

[Nephos]

The whole name thing aside, this a cool character. Just outta curiosity what software are you using.

Nephos

[lildragon]

Oh man, if she was posed, it would've been killer!!! get her posed please:)

salud

[Nephos]

If lildragon says "get her posed" then get her posed :D

Nephos

[Shaykai]

I love the white paint on her eye! totally awesome model, any plans for an animation?

[IkerCLoN]

God! Great model, man! Can you post some wire to see how she's built?

Love your work, man. Awesome!

P.S.: Pirra pawa'!

[Heber G Conde]

Geat Job Man!
I love the belts. The trousers with the creased line ( I don´t know the right name for that!) are very cool too.
The close Up of the head shows very smooth lines, really good.
Keep up the good work on her.
Congratulations
Heber

[sanciok]

Great Work man!! It is modeled in...? Very nice work!!!
:bounce: :applause: :applause:

[Faraguay]

Wow!!!! Amazing modeling skills.

Joder Ballo... es la leche tio. Esta que te cagas. Esta incluso buena... Lo unico que no me gusta personalmente es de cintura para abajo que parece otro modelo... le veo las rodillas muy gordas, como si la tia fuese una barraca. Los calentadores de las espinillas le hacen la pierna mas gorda, por lo que intentaria estilizar un poco mas esa zona (o hacer las piernas mas largas).
Por otro lado, cuando lo texturices, te sugiero que cambies el color de los pantalones... No se, ese color no le pega.

Y ya. De cintura para arriba, perfecto. Muy, muy buen modelo tio.

Oh, welcome to the forums!!!:bounce:

[PhilOsirus]

There are no textures?

[wgreenlee1]

Love her face!


More more!!!!

[Raul3d]

Es alucinante!!!!!!!!!, la unica pega que veo es que los parpados son un poco extraños, tal vez demasiado finos. Pero esta verdaderamente genial: el cuerpo, la cara, todo.

Un abrazo desde Madrid.:thumbsup:

[MaDSheeP]

oh wow!

incredible work!

[road to hell]

Colega te ha quedado de p.m. si señor :drool:
:buttrock:

[cuse]

the modelling looks fantastic!!! cant wait for more updates, think she looks a little short but thats cool :bounce:



cuse
:curious:

[Primus]

The modeling is great :D !!!

Don't make her a generic babe, this looks excellent as it is!

[Gamoron]

She looks awesome dude. I agree that maybe she is a little short, and I agree that you should pose her. She's to well done not to pose her.

Cheers!

[billy_badass]

over all not bad, some issues with the lips, they look a little chapped, and the shapes not right, but not bad for a wip!!

[p4b10]

Muy buen modelo Ballo!!! Quizá las proporciones un poco cortas, pero también depende de la apariencia del modelo, que es que parece que todas las chicas en 3D tienen que ser perfectas... :p
....espero que le pongas texturas pronto... :applause:

[BishopLynx]

shes a cutey but the boots do make her look oddly short.
awesome

[monotypic]

awesome.. i'm a big fan of warpaint...

[mastering3d]

Nice work....The only thing I can see that looks odd is the strap going round the left leg well from where I am looking its is the left leg but in fact its the right looks to big if you understand what I am saying ???,Giveing that big gap...

Lets see some closeup shots of the boot and hands pants & more....


Very nice work...Keep it up..

[MrBraun]

Fantastic model !!! :bounce:
Well well well done !!! :drool:

[iNFERNiS]

she's beautifull :love:


hehehe, nice work, luv it

[WhiteBlaizer]

Holas!

Vaya si que te lo curras bien. Como mejoras :beer: Te voy a decir lo mismo que los demas: los ojos, las pestañas y las piernas fallan un poco, ademas que la textura necesita un poco de mas trabajo, solo eso.. Pero si la chica es asi fisícamente, está muy bien, pero que muy bien. Ponnos una imagen sin la cinta esa de la frente. Si la pones con una pose guay, seguro que te dan una mencion de honor :thumbsup:

Un Saludo! y sigue así!

[JanSan]

hi, Go Ballo, excellent work, so that to emphasize it by part if this brilliant one
..............En cristiano GOOOOOOOOLLLLLLL

Me encanto
JanSan

[Robbert]

Brilliant, cute looking girl,, i agree with the boots ;)
We want more poses!

[jojoba007]

she looks very nice, when will you post us a wire frame?

I love to see high poly wires.

;)

[Gir]

Really great modeling.. Work with her pants, they seem to tight. Otherwise keep up the good work...

:bounce:

[road to hell]

Si puede ser, ponnos una imagen de cara y otra de cuerpo entero en modo rejilla y en alta y baja poligonacion :p . Esa pivita tiene mucho futuro :thumbsup: :thumbsup: .

[ReneAlex]

que raro que no ha salido un argetino declarando que las argentinas son las mas bellas del mundo... ;)

carolina "pampita" ardohain es una de la modelos mas BELLAS del mundo...

me pregunto si ella es en parte fuente de inspiracion para tu modelo?...

well all resume to:
cool model!
well done!
and the unavoiddable... show us the wireframe!

:cool:

[o-phile]

Diablo loco, she's fine :)
and the model's pretty groovy too hehe

[Jenner]

Man this girl is looking good! Awesome job with your modeling!


I have one thing id change if I were you.. That paint over her left eye should be in the texture instead of just some faces with
a color on... Make it look less precise and linear. Just a matter of
taste i guess.. After all I am kind of a noob:rolleyes: :buttrock: :buttrock: :eek: :bounce:

[tim THP]

GOOG GOD MAN! you made it to the banner boxes with only 1 post - UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!:p

[LordEzzat]

Dam Nice Stuff very awesome man nothing bad t say here!!:applause: :surprised

[Starv]

oooo, very nice! :thumbsup:

But yeah, you could tighten her belts a little more.

Amazing work tho :beer:

[facial]

Cool works. Keep post up/ :applause:

[Earthborn]

Great model!! Very impressive work. Can't wait to see the animation on her.

Just out of curiosity... is she just a project for modelling and animating... or is she a character in a larger backstory you're working on?

[DOOMNINJA]

Watch out for the head band! its eating her right ear! Ahhh! Ear eating Head band! Run!

Seriously though, if you notice, the head band seems to intersect through her ear... looks like it goes through the thin part, between the outer edge of the ear and the more, inner, parts.. yeah... (Doomninja = has no knowledge pretaining to EAR anatomy). It probably wont be noticable unless you have closeups in your animation, but i thought I'de mention it if you wanted to change it.

Nice Job Overall though.:drool:

-Doom

[LordShaitan]

Great job I agree with possing her. One more thing, im not sure if this was touched on, but the white strip across her eye looks to perfect. Maybe make it look like its actualy painted on (Have a tiny bit of rough edges) Other then that it looks great.

[mawashi]

Maybe it's just my eyes, but the pierced hole on the looked like it's been drilled :p the edges are too sharp for an ear, I guess.

Other than that, it's super :thumbsup: Very very cool!

[NelsonInomvan]

Hi i just want to say BRAVO. Your model looks very good and i don't agree whit the crits about the boots, they look just fine leave them just like that.

Keep up the good work that all i have to say :applause:

[Spozzfreund]

I like her. :)

[Twisted-Imperial]

well u dont seem to respond much but heres my 2 cents anyways

1. the paint under her eyes, its a cool idea just break up the edge a bit make it look a bit more painted on instead of very straight box of paint.

2.the lips, umm bump map texture would be a good start, your modelling is very clean and id have to say the eyes are awsome, i think with a bit more work it could really be an amazing model

a question, u have alot of secondary movin stuff i was wonderin if u were gonna rig all of it, for example the hair, earings, the bit of shirt that hangs, her necklace, and even a bit of motion on the part of her sleave thing where it meets her hand. anyways i hope to see the animation and hopeful it all holds up keep up the good work (y)

-Peace

[Ballo]

First of all, thank you all for your support, guys. It's the first image I post here, and this is the best welcome a simply 3d user can receive. Thanks. I'd never think this kind of welcome. I'm very surprised :beer:

Talking a little about my model. Well, I think she's not the typical "long-legged-and-busty-girl", and this is what I wanted to do. Maybe she's too short for some of you, but I like her actual built. She's been modelled using MESH MODELLING technic with Polygon Tools for MAX 5. I've used Shag & Hair for the hair.

Nephos.- I'm using 3D Studio MAX version 5.

lildragon.- As soon as posible, a posed and textured one.

Shaykai.- Yep, I'm planning a little short with her and more models. I think she has some future with me ;)

Phil "Osirus".- Yes, there are some textures, but soon the model will be complete.

Jenner.- The white square on her left eye is a texture, not coloured polygons.

DOMMNINJA.- Thanks for the advice, man. I've fixed it.

mawashi.- Already fixed the earrings hole ^^ Thanks!

Korben.- Good eye, pal!!! The reference is a Carolina's photograph, but my model it's not a photograph of the Carolina's photograph... uh... you understand me, I guess. She's so beatiful... sigh!

(now in spanish) Vaya Korben, buen ojo, si la plantilla de la cara es de Carolina, Pero quizás, no esta conseguido el parecido, pero tampoco pretendía sacar una foto de ella, si inspirarme y atraparme con toda su belleza.

Twisted Imperia.- I'm sorry for posting so late, but I wanted to speak with the admin for moving my thread to WIP since I'm doing now the texture and the rigging work. And thanks for your advices.

All spanish people.- DADME TRABAJO!!! xDDD Que nooooooo... Muchísimas gracias por vuestro apoyo, chicos!!!

So here you have a wire and, as soon as possible, the full-textured amazon (with
specular and bump maps) with a explosive-amazing pose.

Thank you all, folks!!!

http://usuarios.lycos.es/ballo3d/varios/wire-1.jpg
http://usuarios.lycos.es/ballo3d/varios/wire-2.jpg
http://usuarios.lycos.es/ballo3d/varios/wire-3.jpg
http://usuarios.lycos.es/ballo3d/varios/wire-4.jpg

[Elliotjnewman]

WOW! this is some of the best work I have seen here. Have you rigged her yet? Cause if you haven't thats going to need some work! what kind of story are u thinking of for the animation?

I have seen some really cool stuff being done with Max, especially recently.

L.

[Joebount]

The model is nice, good texturing qnd rendering but :

1* Your mesh is a bit messy (a lot pf tris that could be avoided easily)
2* When someone sit on something soft, the soft thing collapse under the weight of the people

That's it :)

Nice pics

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