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djtrousdale
06-26-2006, 03:16 AM
Probably none of you remember my character Octogus, but I've been trying him out at EnterVoid. After a harsh crit, I changed him drastically and gave him a story, and now I like him alot more.

The intro story still isn't good enough though, apparently. I'm pretty satisfied with the concept and dialogue and stuff, but it could use improvement aesthetically. I was told the backgrounds needed work.

http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b364/djtrousdale/ooo2page1.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b364/djtrousdale/ooo2page2.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b364/djtrousdale/ooo2page3.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b364/djtrousdale/ooo2page4.jpg
http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b364/djtrousdale/ooo2page5.jpg

:shrug:
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